You live to die
You die to live,
you don't beleive this until you break down and cry
you dont know how you survive
how your breath just seems to get by
it's like your living in a cage
hoping nothing will excape
because the tears you hold back show how week you truley are
this is all i have, if you have any things to add just say, and don't worry if you don't like it say something, jugement will make the song better
2006-06-12 12:05:05 · 8 answers · asked by Areogurl 2 in Beauty & Style ➔ Skin & Body
The wording is good, depressing, but good
2006-06-12 12:08:30 · answer #1 · answered by Angelina 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um...if u r a beginner than its an ok song for a beginner, but a beginner could do better, and if u r an experienced song writer...wow that was awful! but i do hope u keep writing and maybe someday ill herwe it in a music store!
2006-06-12 19:10:59 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its actually very good! But I can't imagine it being a hit song, more like a poem. But its very good keep writing!
2006-06-12 19:09:38 · answer #3 · answered by my sn is fcarox94 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I guess it's not any worse than some of the dumb songs out there. But you really need to learn to spell.
2006-06-12 19:08:43 · answer #4 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good for a start, i write songs myself, i write for the band forgotten tradition,
http://www.myspace.com/forgottentradition keep on going itll be good :)
2006-06-12 19:11:14 · answer #5 · answered by championhearted13 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all......... you die to live does not make any sense!!!!!!!
Besides i don't like it at all.it kinda horrible!
email...... at rajbirkaurtwo@yahoo.com
2006-06-12 19:12:31 · answer #6 · answered by rajbirkaurtwo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too sad to think about.
2006-06-15 13:13:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Get a copyright for it-
2006-06-12 19:12:07 · answer #8 · answered by Kat 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋