“After just three brushes
with Pop ‘n’ Fresh I ended
up with some pearly white teeth”.
Random Hillbilly
is the spelling,punctuation and grammar of that quote correct
2006-06-11 22:06:28 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
also peoples what about this its meant to be a slogan/imperative
You better pop the cap or we'll pop a cap in your ***!!
dont worry about the words i used my teacher said ther are ok
i just wanna know if it is right without " "'
2006-06-11 22:17:48 · update #1
vernonicagzm has correctly said - put a comma after fresh and remove the some. However, in the end put, said before Random
Tthe final answer will be
“After just three brushes
with Pop ‘n’ Fresh, I ended
up with pearly white teeth”.
said Random Hillbilly
2006-06-11 22:13:10 · answer #1 · answered by young_friend 5 · 5⤊ 3⤋
“After just three brushes
with Pop ‘n’ Fresh, I ended
up with some pearly, white teeth”.
or
“After just three brushes
with Pop ‘n’ Fresh, I ended
up with some pearly white teeth”.
2006-06-12 05:10:34 · answer #2 · answered by thisfleshavenged 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need to add a comma after "Fresh", and get rid of the word word "some".
2006-06-12 05:10:13 · answer #3 · answered by Victoria 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Considering the fact that it is colloquial yes.
2006-06-12 05:08:51 · answer #4 · answered by djoldgeezer 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cut out 'some'
2006-06-12 05:14:52 · answer #5 · answered by smarty_pants 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋