is all the spelling right in this ?

Question

I have loved you all my life.
Since the day we first met, I loved you,
You were my hope, my dreams,my love.
For months all I did was dream about you.
I saw your face in every cloud ,and herd your voice in every whisper.
Your deep mysterious eyes were all I ever thought of.
We met each other from time to time.
Months passed by and our friend ship grew,
I counted down the days till I could be with you.
Soon I called you mine.
The years went by,and your love for me faded.
Your deep miserious eyes were no longer a mystery,
but soon becoming a nightmare.
For now the love was hate, there was no depth,
nor love in your once tender eyes.
Only hate,fire and rage possessed your once loving eyes.
I was then all black and blue just for loving you.
I dreaded that look of anger in your eyes,
now haunting me in every shadow.
I herd your screams in every howl of wind with shriek and cry's.
You tore my heart in to peaces, but I could not help loving you.
I called you "mine", you called me "worlthles".
I held your hand and tried to help you up , but you riped it away.
Now those days are over , and so is your life.
But why do I still love you? thought all the hate,all the pain and all the scars.
I still love you just the same.
Even now that you are gone from me, out of my reach for ever

oh and this one too :)

You were the neighbor,just right down the road.
We were just kids, and you did not know.
How I did try to just get a glimpse of those beautiful eyes.
But I was so shy.
My brothers taunted and teased me, till I was begging on my knees.
This made me so shy that all I ever felt was deep,silent cries.
When saw you, I would hide. With tears rolling out of my tender eyes.
I was afraid of rejection, Afraid that you would think of me as
"stupid"and i would be a outcast in your eyes.
The years slipped away and you never knew, how I really felt for you.
Soon, too soon we moved away. It tore my heart out, deep in to the roots of my very soul.
Why did I not just tell you how I really felt?
Now five hundred miles away, I lay in my pain,fear and my own doubt.
But why?

Answer 1

Line 5 herd should be heard
Line 8 friend ship should be one word friendship
Line 12 I think the word should be mysterious
Line 20 herd should be heard and cry's should cries
Line 21 peaces should be pieces
Line 22 worlthles should be worthless
Line 25 should the word be through?

Answer 2

the spellings that are wrong are
line 5- "herd"-heard
line 8-"friend ship"- friendship
line 12-"miserious" - mysterious
line 20-"herd"-heard
line:21-"peaces"-pieces
line 22:-"worlthles" - worthless

and in the second poem every thing is correct

Answer 3

herd = heard
friend ship = friendship
miserious = mysterious
herd = heard
peaces = pieces
worthles = worthless
riped = ripped
thought = through

Have fun!!

Answer 4

Herd--heard
friend ship--friendship
miserious--mysterious
herd--heard
cry's--cries
worlthles--worthless
riped--ripped

Answer 5

No every thing is no spelled right!!!!!!!

In the 12th line from the top you spelled mysterious wrong! You spelled it miserious!!!!!!!

And in the 6th line from the bottom you spelled worthless wrong, you spelled it with only one s at the end!!!!!!!!!!!

Other than those to mistakes everything else is spelled right!!!!

Answer 6

herd=heard
friend ship=friendship
miserious=mysterious
peaces=pieces
worlthles=worthless
thought=through
nice job..how sad tho

Answer 7

Heard, mysterious, shriek, worthless, and ripped.

Answer 8

I agree
with tonalc1

Answer 9

no! you spelled mysterious the second time around incorrectly

Answer 10

pieces