what do you think of this?

Question

I call once more,
To profess to you, my love.
To tell you,
You are the one I adore.

My love for you,
Burns with white hot intensity.
And when you are around,
My legs turn to goo.

When days are long,
I can't stop thinking about you.
You are always in my mind,
Where thoughts are strong.

I love you,
This cannot change.
For as long as time is,
I will love you through and through

Answer 1

My Thoughts

My thoughts of you are near again
I loved the heartfelt poem my friend
I wish that I knew who you are
To ask you if you ever wish on a star.

I've missed your words of love to her
She's oh so lucky to have them occur
Written from the heart and by you
To tell her of your longing too.

So my friend I have to say
It's been a long and lonely day.
You made me cry again it's true
Just thinking of your words and of you.

To you dig digi2 from me (itsimpossible)

Answer 2

Sounds like a song.

Answer 3

i think that you're are really trying to get this person to go out with you and i think it will work! GOOD LUCK =]

P.S.
if you were already going out w/ this person and you screwed it up this should make it all good again!!

Answer 4

well thank you very much so sweet of you to tell me this and I love you too wanna go to dinner tonight lover boy??

Answer 5

I think it is beautifull...You honestly are gifted...It is very romantic.Did you write it for your girlfriend or wife? I can tell,who ever she is,she is lucky to have you. Good luck. ☺

Answer 6

U love her, your point came across well.

Answer 7

Aww that was so nice. you got something. dont let it slip away

Answer 8

i think it is very beautiful and who ever it is for is a very lucky girl.

Answer 9

sounds nice and sweet. you should use it on someone you love.

Answer 10

You made this? Cool.