I DO NOT REMEMBER YOU…
I do not remember you…
But Sometimes…
When I hear your voice, which seems very nice.
My ears want to listen it twice.
I do not remember you…
But Sometimes…
When I hear a sound of your feet,
When you walk, your feet chimes and
My heart start playing a sweet rhyme.
I do not remember you…
But Sometimes…
When you smile; when you laugh,
It makes me fly miles and my sorrow becomes half.
I do not remember you…
But Sometimes… Sometimes… when I breathe.
Prasun Saurav
2006-06-10 01:32:08 · 5 answers · asked by Prasun Saurav 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
you are talented. Every one shows his/her feelings in a way, and one of the most beautiful ways to speak our mind is writing a poem. :)
2006-06-10 01:38:00 · answer #1 · answered by ? 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you sound romantic and deeply in love. people tend to find lots of sweet words pumping from the heart to the lips when in love....sound like me.........ha.... ha... ha.....
2006-06-10 08:39:33 · answer #2 · answered by firewall 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love your poem im a poet myself. i recommend this site for you:
www.thestarlitecafe.com
2006-06-10 08:42:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it very much! it reminded me of my first love and tears came out of my eyes....!
2006-06-10 08:36:28 · answer #4 · answered by tttpsunshine 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice peom... you should put it on poetry.com... i have some there too... it is cool web site
2006-06-10 08:37:05 · answer #5 · answered by araya1124 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋