I See blood seeping out of your skin, I ask why, why would you do this, you turn look at me and cut your throat, I'm in shock wondering why in the hell you would do this, your life was so perfect, now you lay your body on the ground, Blood all around,I cry and you still don't come back, I yell your still laying there, I lay right beside you crying people come out there classes see us and they scream, You know the funny thing is they asked if I'm okay they don't ask about you I wounder why, why didn't they ask aobut you.
2006-06-08 04:40:23 · 16 answers · asked by hannahbanana1880 1 in Beauty & Style ➔ Skin & Body
O.. I like it. It is the kind of morbid things i like. You can tell the pain the girl is in. He had the perfect life and he killed himself in front of you. No one asks about him and she is wondering if it is only you that saw him, or if it was just a painful wish your heart made that you didn't understand.
2006-06-09 04:50:11 · answer #1 · answered by TeAcUp 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good , but what makes you feel like this do u know some one who hurt / killed themself maybe is this a way to help u get over your pain
its a little wierd to think things like that have u had any traumer in your life recently. is there some one you love and scared they might leave you or something / or are you wanting to leave some one and they threatin that if u leave them they will killl themself sorry if its all wrong just tryin to get a bigger picture. also the reason they didnt ask about the peson who was dead was because most likely they were dead and looks to every one that the way you were lay with the person on the floor that you saw it all happen and u may be a little distressed/ or they may think u killed the person and they think u may be a bit phsyco and just tryin to be nice to you so u dont hurt them =) lol hope it helps write more details on your question then i can answer more hope it helps
2006-06-08 11:51:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is your friend having a bad day? The web site says this poem was entered recently. You still have time. Apply pressure to the wound with a bandage or your shirt, which you will have to take off, slowly. Call 911. Tell your friend that he or she will get invited, laid, recognized, honored, noted, memorialized, immortalized or at least a head nod, if he or she sticks around. Remember, as you enter the evil world of our "adult" capitalist society, where nothing matters but income and achievments, stay true to yourself. And try to pay your own way.
2006-06-08 11:56:02 · answer #3 · answered by amonkeytyping 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not good. It barely rhymes, and it was absolutely no rhyme scheme or verse type. It sounds more like an Eminem song that a poem really.
2006-06-08 11:44:50 · answer #4 · answered by cgc17788 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not much like a poem but if it was a story or a verse in a song it would be good...
2006-06-08 11:46:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is very bad and you should delete it. But that is my opinion. Why would anyone say such things? Are you in need of help, if so I hope you get it.
2006-06-09 11:38:01 · answer #6 · answered by ****** 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what happ to u
any serious prb
nice effort but try to be happy
dnt b sad its life ppl come n go
but dnt lose hope
2006-06-08 11:59:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you need help or attention. You need someone to fill the void
2006-06-08 11:44:32 · answer #8 · answered by Jason Heinze 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Deep....but I wonder what are you thinking? Are you ok? But I like it Good Job!
2006-06-08 11:44:16 · answer #9 · answered by Italian Medallion 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
y would u want to write a sck poem like that! do u know they dont ask abt the other he/she took his/her life that y
2006-06-08 11:46:59 · answer #10 · answered by beth 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋