I'm really struggling with this thesis statement and naming the topic,askingquestion children & obesityinterne

Question

My professor keeps telling me my topics are not persuasive or argumentive enough
for my thesis. My topics children & the internet or children and obesity today. then I have to state a research question and answer it and then state my thesis. I'm really struggling please help get me started if you can.

Answer 1

First of all, your topic should be something like:
"Changing the Circle of Deadly Child Obesity"

Secondly, your research question should be something to the effect of:
"What can we do to prevent the circle of obesity that has started with this generation?"

Thirdly, your thesis should be stated persuasively as:
"We must stop child obesity now."

Notice how I label everything within the statements. It is not just "child obesity", it is either "deadly" or a "circle". These are argumentative and persuasive examples. Also, the "we must stop" part of the thesis statement shows that it is something you are trying to persuade people to do or be aware of.

Hope that helps
Jon

Answer 2

your questions are too broad try being more specific eg should raising obese children be classed as abuse. does raising fat kids make you a bad parent. or can children distinquish between good and bad information on internet. should under 18s be banned from the internet. also try being contriversal eg as we have loads of information on heathy eating readily available having obese children is an indicator of being an unsuitable parent

Answer 3

Perhaps: IS there a link between childhood obesity and the amount of exercise done in schools?