plz proof read my poem...plzz pretty please...all you have to do is copy and paste. check grammar?

Question

There is nothing on earth more beautiful to me than the way to talk to me.
No joy greater than sleeping in your arms.
No pleasure greater than waking up hearing your voice every morning.
No sound sweeter than the way you whisper how much you love me.
No touch softer than the way you hold me in your arms.
No name cuter than the ones you call me.
No desire stronger than the ones you arouse in me.
There is nothing on earth can makes me happier than being with you day and night.

Answer 1

Change the last line to:

There is nothing on earth that can make me happier than being with you day and night.

or

There is nothing on earth that makes me happier than being with you day and night.

Answer 2

There is nothing on earth more beautiful to me than the way you talk to me.
No joy greater than sleeping in your arms.
No pleasure greater than waking up hearing your voice every morning.
No sound sweeter than the way you whisper how much you love me.
No touch softer than the way you hold me in your arms.
No name cuter than the ones you call me.
No desire stronger than the ones you arouse in me.
There is nothing on earth that makes me happier than being with you day and night.

Answer 3

extremism is the reason for the whole lot . now who s fanning the extremism flame? non muslims is the reply. simply learn right here how non muslims name muslims names and insult the prophet and Allah and plan to burn quran ...and so on the record is lengthy. a few muslims simply can t take it anymore, bored stiff. i believe that is the reason however i could also be mistaken despite the fact that i m definite i'm really not :P have you ever ever heard a muslim insulting jesus or moses or calling for burning the bible or some other holy e-book? under no circumstances!! we don t do this . all people has a button that when you maintain pushing matters would pass the mistaken means.. and mine is the skinny vs fats females factor. that s my button so doooont push it.:)

Answer 4

I think you mean:
There is nothing on earth more beautiful to me than the way YOU talk to me

Answer 5

I think you mean you instead of to in the last part of the first line " than the way you talk to me"

Answer 6

Sounds like you have it pretty bad.. that old disease called LOVE. Otherwise it is great!

Answer 7

I checked....nothing is misspelled. I like it anyway.

Answer 8

great poem.

Answer 9

OK.