this is just one of my pomes do you think it good?
ill just sit in the corner in my little wooden chair
all by myself with no one to care
and ill wounder to myself if this life will ever dare
but till that day ill just sit in the corner in my little wooden chair
and hope to myself that someone will care
and as i sit in my little wooden chair
ill give you that stare that no one would dare
2006-06-06 11:37:52 · 10 answers · asked by remme 2 in Beauty & Style ➔ Fashion & Accessories
i like it!!!! keep it up girl!
2006-06-06 11:40:29 · answer #1 · answered by pUrpLe coW 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I can picture your little wooden chair, with you in it. Good imagery! Keep working on poems. I like this one...
2006-06-06 11:43:08 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good Poem
Quick question though:
Why are you in the chair in the first place?
2006-06-06 11:51:27 · answer #3 · answered by nalaredneb 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a bit basic but it's alright. I wonder why you are posting this in the beauty and style section though.
2006-06-06 11:40:39 · answer #4 · answered by anouska1983 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Quit asking for opinions. What matters most is YOU created the poem. It is part of your "work" now.
Just post it!
2006-06-06 13:21:00 · answer #5 · answered by Cassor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem.Find some friends.
2006-06-06 11:43:57 · answer #6 · answered by robert p 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice!
2006-06-06 11:41:07 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Watch your spellings!
2006-06-06 11:42:58 · answer #8 · answered by Sam k 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, it IS poetry, keep it up, you have a good start.
2006-06-06 11:41:22 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah you are perty good
2006-06-06 11:40:36 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋