Many times have I said,
How I love you.
Many times has my heart bled,
For you have made me blue.
All I ask in return,
Is your love.
For my love doth burn,
For you, my dove.
But love for me,
You do not give.
For you cannot see,
How, for you I live.
2006-06-06 08:54:12 · 8 answers · asked by Sammy Hagar 3 in Social Science ➔ Other - Social Science
Yes, I like it...but it is so sad!
Maybe because I know there have been so many times that I could have said the same words to someone...
2006-06-06 10:19:20 · answer #1 · answered by Selkie 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Sunset Walks
Sunset walks I do recall
Also meadows on a hill.
If I don't know how much you love
Then I guess I never will
The well drawn lines have fallen down
For each of us I know
Isn't it time to draw a line
To let the love life flow?
Perhaps you can recall the day
I told you what I felt
You told me you were nervous
And rather not be dealt
The hand of fate
Laid upon your plate
By one who seemed so bold.
When all I wanted to tell you
Was I needed your help more than gold
Somehow it came to me through God
Although no one believed
I told you it was from the heart
But you were not relieved
To talk to you and tell you true
All I had to face alone
How to stop my pulse in such a race
Without seeing your adoring face
Your voice has swept me off my feet
I wish it was mine to hear
Whenever I wish for you to sing
You would be forever near.
How much more can we relay
Our feelings so sublime
Do you want this world of ours
To simply run out of time?
One kiss upon my burning lips
I long for with desire
Your simple look into my eyes
Sets my body on fire.
I saw you look at me so quick
When I saw you last
It made me melt and fall apart
And broke my hurting heart.
Why can't we begin to know
What each so wants to say
Please tell me to my face my love
What I wish to never go away.
Sunset walks and all night talks
And meadows on a hill.
So is this enough or do you wonder what I'm talking about? If so then this is written by me for itcanbedone
2006-06-06 09:55:03 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The word "love" is said too much. Here and there change it up. Try adore...cherish...
2006-06-06 08:58:08 · answer #3 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was gud but i think it could have been better
best of luck for next time -
;) ashika
2006-06-06 08:58:12 · answer #4 · answered by Ashika 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
tuh
2006-06-06 08:57:13 · answer #5 · answered by sad1986 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to who me?;)~i like it anyways~
2006-06-06 08:57:52 · answer #6 · answered by xX~Mandy~Xx 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think is cute!
2006-06-06 13:19:51 · answer #7 · answered by Team Jacob :) ||kiki♥|| 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
loser
2006-06-06 09:44:17 · answer #8 · answered by teenagegluesniffer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋