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本人於63年6月25日出生於嘉義市，家中成員四名， 先父3年前仙逝，母今年57歲，目前務農，家管、姊今年36歲，九年前嫁為人妻，兄今年34歲，已婚，目前人在高雄從事建築業。自小父母對子女之教育相當重視，對子女的期望相當的高，希望將來皆有一番成就。父母為使我們有良好的就學環境，辛苦賺錢，貸款購買了一棟離學校相當近的房子，只是希望我們的成就能超越他們。
國小時成績平平。國一時，成績尚可，排行全校前十名，國二時，因對美工方面有興趣且執著，導致成績不理想，被家父怒斥一番，但仍無法減少我對於美術方面的熱衷。專科時，考慮畢業後的就業情況，而選擇機械科，在學校中擔任科學會美工負責人，並因同學的肯定，向學校推薦本人擔任登山社社長一職，這兩件事是本人求學生涯中，所最光榮並值得回憶的事。畢業後，隨即展開兩年之軍旅生活，在這規律的兩年中，學到了作人處事的道理及了解工作團隊的重要性，並結交不少朋友。退伍後，所從事之工作，雖有空間能有自己發揮，但畢竟是被侷限於一狹小之空間中，而認為無法使自己更加成長，而毅然辭退，心中雖波折不斷，但總希望能夠朝向更合於自身興趣及理想之工作。
六年前來到富喬工業，一開始先擔任機械保養員一職，工作內容為機械維修，工作一年後改擔任機械零件購買與管理,公司待遇不錯且有很多可以學習的事情，這讓我感到興奮與高興，便一直工作至今，雖然公司給的薪水符合目前需求，但人往高處爬，我希望能更加充實自己，賺更多的錢。
因此本人對此工作具高度興趣，且公司制度相當完善，如善加培養，定能發揮此專職，希望閣下能夠給於我這個機會為貴公司服務，本人定會盡心盡力，相信能勝任愉快。

Answer 1

I beg to state,

I was born in a family, in Chiayi, with another 4 members, Dad, has passed away; Mom, 57-year-old housewife and engaged in cultivation; my sister, 36 year-old, has been a housewife for 9 years; my brother, married, devoteds himself to building industry. My parents have been emphasize the education, get a big hope on the children, hoping that they will have some achievements. To creat a good study environment, my parents had a loan on a house, near the school, only to hope that we would surpass them one day.
My grades in elementary school were just fine. In the 7th grade, I was ranked within the first 10 students at school. In 8th grade, my spending too much time on art led to the poor result in my study; therefore,Father scolded me on that, but I still kept quite high interest in art. In college, I chose to study mechanics considering my future after school. I served as art leader of Science committee. I was quite proud of those 2 things. After graduating, I enlisted in the army for 2 years. Meanwhile, I learned how to cope with people and importance of cooperation; I am also glad for making more friends. After army, the job I did was confined. I thought it wouldn't help me in upgrading myself, so I made up my mind to quit it, looking for one more suitable and ideal.
I came to FuChio Industry 6 years ago as a machine maintenance worker at the beginning. After one year, I changed to take in charge of managing and purchasing machine parts. Our company treated workers well and I learnt a lot, which excited me. Consequently, I have been sticking to my position till now. However, people always hope to get better chance and enhance themselves more, making more money.
As the above statement, I am highly intrigued by the job you provide. Besides, you have quite well-organized system for workers, such as training. I hope to get the chance to work for you. I will do my best and I believe that I am competent.

Answer 2

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