請各前輩幫幫忙看看修改我的英文自傳哦～很急，謝謝哦。

Question

　　　　　　　　　　　　Autobiography
I am being responsible to any thing I do; I think it will do a great help on maintaining our customer or the other thing. And I welcome new challenges, quickly learning new skills and procedures with excellent memory retention.

Even in high-stress atmosphere, I functions well. I have excellent interpersonal and communication skills; cooperative, patient, supportive and loyal team.

Now I have Qualification of the Financial Planning Personnel; the Life Insurance Agent; the Trust Agent; the Senior Securities Specialist; the Securities Investment Trust and Consulting Professionals; the Futures Specialist. At present, I am preparing to take an exam for June, 2007 CFA Level 1.My future plan is after getting qualification of CFA. I will prepare to take an exam for CIIA. Then, prepare to take an exam for CFP. Then, I will test into Executive Master of Science in Finance of The City University of New York in Taiwan.

I graduated from $$ CATHOLIC UNIVERSITY，Bachelor of Business Administration,200$.Major fields of study financial, research and analysis, management and human resources. During university, I got my first part-time job in C.G. international company. Affiliation by establishing a good team, my position was from Sales Associate promote to Ordinary sales activities and management of the department.

My Chinese name is $$$ ; English name is David. I was born and raised in an ordinary family. My family moved to $$ , a suburban area of Taipei, and I spend most of my childhood and school years there. Thank parents’ cultivation and the education. Enable me to become to be glad the study, accepts the challenge, EQ is high, health condition good person.

I am very interested in opportunities with Citibank Corporation. I work hard and can easily adapt to a new position. I am sure that working in your organization will be a great asset for my career and I will be a great asset for your organization.

謝謝安娜給我的建議~現在我按照您的建議修改好了，想寄給您看看格式有沒有問題，可以給我您的e-mail嗎?麻煩您了，謝謝您。

不好意思，我到現在才看到妳的回應，我已經寄給妳了，不知妳收到了沒，麻煩妳了，謝謝妳，感激不儘哦~祝妳新年快樂

Answer 1

English Autobiography
I am a responsible person towards everything I do, I believe responsibility is required for good performance toward customer control and other work related issues. I welcome new challenges, and quickly learning new skills, and I have excellent memory retention towards procedures.

Even in highly-stressed atmosphere, I can function well. I have excellent interpersonality and communication skills; I am cooperative, patient, supportive and loyal.

I also have Qualification as a Financial Planning Personnel; Life Insurance Agent; Trust Agent; Senior Securities Specialist; Securities Investment Trust and Consulting Professional; and Futures Specialist. Presently, I am preparing to take an exam for June, 2007 CFA Level 1.My plan for the future is after qualifing for the CFA, I will prepare to take an exam for CIIA. Then, prepare to take an exam for CFP. Then, I will test into Executive Master of Science in Finance of The City University of New York in Taiwan.

I graduated from $$ CATHOLIC UNIVERSITY，Bachelor of Business Administration,200$.Major fields of study are Finance, Research and Analysis, Management and Human Resources. During university, I got my first part-time job in C.G. International Company. Affiliation by establishing a good team, my position was from Sales Associate promote to Ordinary sales activities and management of the department.

2006-12-22 22:24:53 補充：
My Chinese name is $$$ ; English name is David. I was born and raised in an ordinary family. My family moved to $$ , a suburban area of Taipei, and I spend most of my childhood and school years there. I thank my parents for their cultivation and education towards me.

2006-12-22 22:25:20 補充：
Enabling me to become a curious learner, and a challenger. I have a high EQ, and my health conditions are well.
I am very interested in cooperating with Citibank Corporation. I work hard, and play smart.

2006-12-22 22:25:41 補充：
I can easily adapt to a new position. I am sure that working in your organization will be a great asset for my career and I will be a great asset for your organization.

2006-12-29 18:03:38 補充：
~~@@" 好幾天嚕~都沒看到你寄來....我的email : [e-mail] 下週我人又會在中南部嚕~舉時會比較沒空. 週末寄給我吧~

Answer 2

提供你參考,相信會對你有幫助(內有面試秘訣):

http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!w6gPRaOCFQVCeNg8iHiYXJOJIRSG2Lw-/article?mid=1

Answer 3

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