請教英文高手幫忙翻譯英文自傳(20點)

Question

以下是我想要表達我所應徵工作所寫的自傳,可以麻煩英文高手幫我翻譯嗎???
"本人對於電子產業相當感興趣,自退伍後至今從事技術層面的工作,原廠的售後服務及維修讓自己的本質學能更加紮實,也因為曾經在部隊任職過教育班長,鍛鍊出更高的毅力;個性開朗的我對工作伙伴熱心關懷,因此為自己也搏得好人緣。希望自己所學能夠發揮應用於公司團隊,進而增加公司在市場上之競爭力。"

Answer 1

"本人對於電子產業相當感興趣,自退伍後至今從事技術層面的工作,原廠的售後服務及維修讓自己的本質學能更加紮實,也因為曾經在部隊任職過教育班長,鍛鍊出更高的毅力;個性開朗的我對工作伙伴熱心關懷,因此為自己也搏得好人緣。希望自己所學能夠發揮應用於公司團隊,進而增加公司在市場上之競爭力。"
"I am quite interested to the electronic industry, been engaged in the work of technological aspect so far since leaving the army, it can be more sturdy that the after-sale service and maintenance of the former factory let one's own essence studied, once held a post to educate the monitor in the army too, the high willpower that forged the chain and set out; I that the individual character is optimistic am to job partner's enthusiastic care, so fight popularity for oneself. Hope to learn to give play to and apply to company's group by oneself, and then increase the competitiveness on the market of company. "

Answer 2

"oneself towards electron's industry equivalent to take interest in, since retire from the army behind up to now engage in technology's level de job, original factory de after service and maintain let own essence learn can much za really, too because ever hold a post educate monitor at troop, exercise come out much high perseverance; character's open and clear I to work comrade ardently care, so for oneself too fight nice guy fate. Hope oneself learn be able to exert should be used for company's troop, and furthur increase company's competitive power on market. "


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