這樣的英文自我介紹文法對嘛?幫我修正一下

Question

My name is XXX . I am come from 高雄

My constellations is aries (我的星座是牡羊座)

There are frow people in my family including my father,my mother,my brother and me (我家有4個人包刮我爸爸我媽媽我哥哥跟我)

My hobbies are sing and watch movie(我的嗜好是唱歌跟看電影) hobbies後面是要用arec還是is???

My personality is vigous(我的個性是活潑的)

choclate is my favorite food (巧克力是我喜愛的食物)

I like snoopy vear much so I have a lot of related snoopy merchandise(我非常喜愛史努比，所以我有許多史努比的相關商品)

Thanks listens to my introduction (謝謝聆聽我的介紹)

有不對的地方幫我修正>~<" 謝謝呦

hobbies後面是要用arec還是is???
不小心按到多哩一個c

Answer 1

由於我沒辦法用顏色 所以我只打錯的上來
I am from 高雄 (不用come) 如果你要用come 就用 I come from 高雄(不用am) 兩者擇一

My constellation is aries. (constellation不用加s)

There are four people in my family, including my father,my mother,my brother and me. (你把four打成from)

I like snoopy very much, so I have a lot of related snoopy merchandise. (小錯誤 very打錯了)

最後一句可以說 Thank you for listening to my introduction.
只是這樣講比較順口好聽一點

Answer 2

My name is XXX.

I am from Kaohsiung. (I come from Kaohsiung.)
[這兩句都是--我來自高雄]

My constellation is Aries.

There are four people in my family, including my parents,

my brother and me.

My hobbies are singing and watching the movies.

My personality is vigorous.

My favorite food is chocolate.

I like Snoopy very much, and I have a lot of related merchandise of
Snoopy.

Thanks for your listening.

因為不知道你要不要增加什麼，所以只將你的句子做點修改。
希望對你有幫助!!!

Answer 3

My name is XXX . I am from 高雄

My zodiac sign is Aries (我的星座是牡羊座)

There are four people in my family , my father,my mother,my brother and me. (我家有4個人包刮我爸爸我媽媽我哥哥跟我)

My hobby is singing a song and watching movie. (我的嗜好是唱歌跟看電影) hobbies後面是要用arec還是is???

I am vigous(我的個性是活潑的)

my favorite food is chocolate. (巧克力是我喜愛的食物)

I like Snoopy vear much and I have a lot of products with Snoopy. (我非常喜愛史努比，所以我有許多史努比的相關商品)

Thanks your listening!(謝謝聆聽我的介紹)


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