請問...有誰可以幫我檢查一下英文文法和單字呢?

Question

有誰可以幫我檢查一下單字文法有沒有錯??
句子是否通順??
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I am a student now. I’m living in Taipei city for twenty years. I hate here for many things. I often go to country that let me know there has any advantage. Here are three advantage of country.

First, in the country, traffic accident is not very. The people don’t have much money to buy a motorcycle or a car. They usually walk to school, work, grocery store, ……etc. In the country, the transportation vehicle is very rare, except bicycle. I think, the bicycle as for doesn’t create the too serious traffic accident.

Second, if you want have the peaceful environment or the court in the house, that’s certainly all can have in the country. They often don’t have amusement. They just go to jogging or play chess under a tree, chat with neighbor, ……etc. In the country, often house all quite big, the garden relative is also big. In the garden, you may handle the matter which many wants to do. For example, you can exposes to the clothes or the child can play games, also can plant flowers or tree.

Third, in the country, there people is very nice and amorous. They like friends sojourning to the family in their house very much. When you loss ask them for the road, they must tell you the true one. They don’t like the people in the city that are emotionless very much.

I really want to live in the country. I hate living in the city, although is very convenient. My parents want to living in the country too. If I can do, I want move to the country now.

我星期二就要交了
麻煩各位一下
感激不盡...

Answer 1

I am a student at the moment. i have been living in Taipei city for twenty years. I dont really like city for some reasons. Therefore,I often go to countryside that i can understand the advantages of countryside by visiting there. Tere are three advantages of countryside.

Firstly, there are less traffic accident in the countryside because people who live there, they do not have enough money to buy a motorcycle or a car. They usually walk to school, work place, and grocery store etc. In the countryside, the public transportation is as not good as city. Therefore, people ride a bicycle instead of taking public transportation. I think, a bicycle does not cause too serious traffic accident.

Secondly, if you want to have a peaceful environment or a court at outside your house, that is certainly all you can have in the countryside. They do not have a lot of amusement. They always go for jogging or play chess under a tree, chat with neighbor. The houses of countryside are all quite big, the garden and relatives are also big. Luckily, you can exposes your clothes for sunshine or childern can play games with each other, and also you can plant flowers or trees on the garden.

Thirdly, in the countryside, there people are very nice and amorous. They like friends sojourning to the family in their house very often. When you got lost and ask any people for the road, they must tell you where is a right direction. They do not like the people in the city who are emotionless very much.

I really want to live in the countryside. I hate living in the city, though in the city is very convenient. My parents want to live in the countryside as well. If I can do, I want to move to the countryside right now.


我幫你訂正好嚕

這裡有一些問題 你可能以後寫文章要注意一下唷

第一點

就是 動詞(V)後面要加to 連接

I want "to" have←

第二點

時態問題喔!!

為什麼用I've been living不是用im呢

因為妳現在持續到現在都還住在那裡
所以說 得用完美進行試喔

第三點

就是 the 跟 a的問題唷!!

這些寫文章的時候都要注意喔^^

祝你好運喔

2007-12-23 14:49:45 補充：
對了 我盡量沒有改你很多

因為不想壞了你原本的意思

所以我盡量改的跟妳原文差不多

2007-12-23 19:01:00 補充：
I am a student at the moment. i have been living in Taipei city for twenty years. I dont really like city for some reasons. Therefore,I often go to countryside that i can understand the advantages of countryside by visiting there. There are three advantages of countryside.

2007-12-23 19:02:07 補充：
Firstly, there are less traffic accidents in the countryside because people who live there, they do not have enough money to buy a motorcycle or a car. They usually walk to school, work place, and grocery store etc.

2007-12-23 19:02:25 補充：
In the countryside, the public transportation is not as good as city. Therefore, people ride a bicycle instead of taking a public transportation. I think, a bicycle does not cause too serious traffic accidents.

2007-12-23 19:02:36 補充：
Secondly, if you want to have a peaceful environment or a court at outside your house, that is certainly all you can have in the countryside. They do not have a lot of amusements.

2007-12-23 19:03:50 補充：
They always go for jogging, play chess under a tree, chat with neighbors. The houses of countryside are all quite big, gardens and relatives are also big.

2007-12-23 19:04:00 補充：
Luckily, you can exposes your clothes for sunshine or childern can play games with each other, and also you can plant flowers or trees on your garden.

2007-12-23 19:04:51 補充：
Thirdly, in the countryside, there people are very nice and zealous. They all look like friends and often sojourn to other people's house.

2007-12-23 19:04:58 補充：
When you got lost and ask any people for the way to go, they must tell you where is a right direction. They do not like the people in the city who are emotionless very much.

2007-12-23 19:05:12 補充：
I really want to live in the countryside. I hate living in the city, though in the city is very convenient. My parents want to live in the countryside as well. If I can do, I want to move to the countryside right now.

Answer 2

給你一些建議, 有些不合習慣的需要改寫.

I am a student . I'v lived in Taipei city for twenty years.
I don't like the city at all.
I often go to countryside to explore many advantage.
I found ot thare are many advantage in the countryside.


First of all, there are very feww traffic accident in the countrydise.
People don’t want to spend too much money to buy a motorcycle or a car. They usually walk to schools, to work, to grocery stores, ……etc. In the countryside, the public transportation is very rare, they usually ride a bicycle. I think, bicycle doesn’t make any serious traffic accident.

The second, if you want to have the peaceful environment or the yard in the house, that’s certainly anyone can live in the countrydide. They only have very few amusement. They just go jogging or play chess under the tree, chat with neighbors, ……etc. In the countrydise, the houses are usually large, and with a big garden. In the garden, you can do anything you wants to . For example, you can hang the clothes and the child can play around there, you also can grow flowers or trees.

The third, in the countryside, people are very nice and active. They treat friends so nice and often come to the other families as well. When you get lost and ask them for the direction, they will be happt to help you. They don’t like the people live in the city who are unfriendly.

I really fell like living in the countryside. I dislike the living way in the city, dispite its convenient. My parents internd to live in the small village in the countryside . If that is possible, I can't wait to move to the samll village.

Answer 3

I am a student now. I’m living in Taipei city for twenty years. (I have been living in Taipei City for twenty years) I hate here for many things.(I dislike the city for several reasons. 用hate語氣上有點太過了一點) I often go to country that let me know there has any advantage. (Therefore, I often go to countryside because it has many advantages over big cities). Here are three advantage(要加s) of countryside.

First, in the country, traffic accident is not very (there are less traffic accidents). The people don’t have much money to buy a motorcycle or a car. They usually walk to school, work, grocery store, ……etc. In the country, the transportation vehicle is very rare, except bicycle. I think, the bicycle as for doesn’t create the too serious traffic accident. (The people in the countryside are often poorer and don't have extra money to buy motorcycles or cars. They usually walk to school, work, grocery stores ... ect). In the country, there are more bicycles than motor vehicles. I think bicycles doesn't cause serious traffic accident.)

Second, if you want have the peaceful environment or the court in the house, that’s certainly all can have in the country(Second, living in the country allows to have a peaceful living environment and have a garden outside of the house). They often don’t have amusement. (They often have less night life and entertainment). They just go to jogging or play chess under a tree, chat with neighbor, ……etc. In the country, often house all quite big, the garden relative is also big. In the garden, you may handle the matter which many wants to do. For example, you can exposes to the clothes or the child can play games, also can plant flowers or tree.



(我現在要出門，還沒改完的晚點繼續補充)

Answer 4

我建議你可以到奇摩字典裡查詢!
那裡有段落翻譯,你可以翻譯看看,在做修改!

Answer 5

恩~!!我學英文時間也有個7~8年了~!!
我覺得你ㄉ文法應該是ok~!!
但有些小細節My parents want to living in the country too.
不能說 to living 要說to live!!
要is am are後面才能加ing!!
恩~!!大概就是這種細節要注意!!
Second, if you want have the peaceful environment 要變成
Second, if you want TO have the peaceful environment
要加to!!
妳自己在注意一下囉!!