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Ken-Ting, located at the southern tip of Taiwan, has warm climate, pleasant scenery and easy access. It is one of the most popular resorts, attracting millions of both domestic and foreign tourists every year. In here, you can see the dazzling bright sunshine, azure blue seawater and clean shining sand beach, and some of the seawater fell pattering upon the skerry. In the morning, you may play the seawater in different beaches. Every beach has kinds of different scenes; at night you may go around the street and buy something else, and a lot of foods and souvenirs you can choose. If you don’t go around the street, you can go to pub to relax the body. Of course, the trip in Ken-ting is your best choice.

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Ken-Ting, located at the southern tip of Taiwan, has warm climate, pleasant scenery and easy access. It is one of the most popular resorts, attracting millions of both domestic and foreign tourists every year.

In here, you can see the dazzling bright sunshine, azure blue seawater and clean shining sand beach, and some of the seawater fell pattering upon the skerry.

In the morning, you may play the seawater in different beaches. Every beach has kinds of different scenes; at night you may go around the street and buy something else, and a lot of foods and souvenirs you can choose. If you don’t go around the street, you can go to pub to relax the body.

Of course, the trip in Ken-ting is your best choice.

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Being one of the most popular resorts and located at the southern tip of Taiwan, Ken-Tin features warm climate, gorgeous scenery, and easy access, attracting millions of both domestic and foreign tourists each year.

On arrival, you are greeted with dazzling bright sunshine, clean and shining sand beaches, and azure blue seawater that sways pattering upon the skerry.

During day time, you get to indulge yourselves with aquatics at beaches, each of them displaying unique scenes, while as night approaches, it is equally enjoyable to go around the main street, shopping at will and dining at ease, with relaxing yourselves in pubs being another nice option.

A trip to Ken-Tin is sure to make you feel like never before! Come and try for yourselves!