這是我的英文作業 是Kiss me音樂的心得
可以的話請幫我檢查文法 時態即用詞的適當與否
“Kiss me” is an airy and sweet song.
When I fist listened to the song on the TV, I was paying attention to the song at once.
The song is accounting a girl’s thought about her and her lovely boyfriend, and the place that she described in the song was so romantic and sweet. Besides, the song’s singer Leigh Nash who had a dolce voice interprets the song very great. Last bit not least, the lyric used simple word letting me understand when I took a gander at it.
These elements making me charm into the song and love the song immediately.
謝謝了@u@" 我對文法時態之類的最不在行了....
2007-12-17 19:32:03 · 2 個解答 · 發問者 Zona 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
是Last but not least...哈哈 打錯了喔= 3 =
2007-12-17 19:33:51 · update #1
“Kiss me” is an airy and sweet song.
When I fist listened to the song on [the] TV, I was [ paying attention] to the song at once.
The song is [ accounting] a girl’s thought about her and her lovely boyfriend, and the place that she described in the song was so romantic and sweet. Besides, the song’s singer Leigh Nash who had a[ dolce] voice interprets the song very great. Last bit not least, the lyric used simple word letting me understand when I took a gander at it.
[[These [ elements] making me charm into the song and love the song immediately.]]
會寫就會改, 框出須要修改的部分
good luck
2007-12-19 03:13:44 · answer #1 · answered by Ahoo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
給大大一個意見: -
既然你對時態不在行, 何不只用簡單過去式?
2007-12-18 18:17:58 · answer #2 · answered by joe 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋