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Question

請幫我翻譯一下 (面試要用到的)

你好,我叫ooo,今年22歲,身高165體重50,血型B型,我出生於台北,畢業於oo大學的oo系,我的專長是整體造型,因為我認為美的事物讓人心情愉悅,所以我希望以我的所能,讓每位客人都能開心的迎接每一天.

我雖然現在的經驗不足,但是我很有耐心,可以學習,希望能有這個機會,能為貴公司服務.

Answer 1

Hello, my name is OOO, I'm 22 years old this year. My height is 165 cm(centimeter), weight is 50 kg(kilogram) and blood type is B. I am born
in Taipei and graduated from Department of OOO (系名) at Colleage
(University). My specialty is Wedding fashion & beauty (美容美髮店用的名詞), because I think the beautiful thing make people happy, I hope
that I can use what I learn to make every customer to greet everyday happily.

2007-12-13 21:11:51 補充：
還有一段…
Although my experience is not enough, but I am a very patient person and willing to learn. I hope I have a chance to service for your company.

Answer 2

～＊Tobey...瑄＊～ ( 's answer is good

Answer 3

Thank you, My name is OOO, 22 years old, a hundred and sixty centmeter hight, fifty kilogram weight; blood type is B. I am from Taipei, graduated from ( OOO ) University, major in OOO. And my speciality is Beauty and Style.
Beauty is not only skin deep. So, I hope every guests are satisfied here.
Although I din't have enough experience in this field, I will learn to work well, and I am with great patience. And I hope the company may offer me this job opportunuty.

2007-12-14 01:12:04 補充：
主考官請你坐下或請你回答時, 先說 thank you

不是用 good morning (你好)等招呼用與

祝你面試順利 !

Answer 4

003 大致都正確。除了
1. I was born in Taipei.... -> be 動詞要用 過去式

2. Although 存在的句子，不合用 but，所以要去掉 but 改成.
Although my experience is not enough, I am very patient and willing to learn.

Answer 5

Good morning/afternoon/evening! My name is xxx. I am 22 years old, 165 centermeter in hight and 50 kilogram in weight. I was born in Taipei and graduated from xxx department of xxx university. My specialty is overall styling and modeling. I believe pretty things can make people happy and joyful, so I hope that I can do what I can to make the clients to greet everyday happily.

I may not have enough experience, but I am very patient and very willing to learn. I hope that I have the chance to work in your company.

(盡量用簡單的英文讓你背的起來嘍~ 加油~ Good Luck!!)

Answer 6

You good, I call ooo, this year 22 years old, height 165 body weights
50, blood-group B, I am born to Taibei, graduates to oo university's
oo department, my specialty is the overall modelling, because I
thought the beautiful thing lets the person mood be joyful, therefore
I hoped by me energy, enables each visitors all happy to greet every
one day

I although present being insufficiently experienced, but I have the
patience very much, may study, hoped can have this opportunity, can
serve for your firm

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