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Question

In the night, we have a buffet in Korean Restaurant. The food are various, my friend will like it. After the dinner, we will go around Tsim Sha Tsui East.There are some glaring views outside the building.

最後兩句，是說我們行尖東,那裡有很多燈飾在建築物外面。

這段英文，是說我與帶外國朋友去香港旅行
當然是future tense。

這段英文，是說我將會帶外國朋友去香港旅行

Answer 1

你呢段野係future定past架???

At night, we had buffet dinner in a Korean restaurant. The restaurant provided different kinds of food that my friend appreciated it much. After that, we went to have a walk around the eastern part of Tsim Sha Tsui and there were many shinging illuminations outside the buildings.

Answer 2

At night, we have a buffet in Korean restaurant. The food are various, my friend will like it. After the dinner, we will go around East Tsim Sha Tsui .There are some glaring views outside the building.

2007-12-15 12:29:04 補充：
correction:we will have a buffet in Korean restaurant.

Answer 3

We will have a buffet in Korean Restaurant at night. There ia a large vriety of food there, I am sure that my friend will like it. After having dinner, we'll go to Tsim Sha Tsui for a walk. The glaring decorations around the building is enjoyable.

Answer 4

Future tense:
[At] night,we [will] have a buffet in Korean restaurant. The food [is] various, my friend will like it. After the dinner, we will go around Tsim Sha Tsui East. There are some glaring [decorations] outside the [buildings].