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請英文達人幫我改出這篇英文文章中的錯誤~~~!!!謝謝

Types of Errors: word choice, tense, words missing, spelling, run-on sentences/puncteation, word form, and unnecessary words.
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Beethoven composed various genres. Including symphonies, concerti, piano sonatas, string quartets, chamber music, masses, an opera and so on. As far as musical form is concerned, Beethoven inherited Haydn and Mozart, but extened them, his music was motive decelopment.
For many people, Beethoven represent the hightest level of musical genius, reportedly said, “keep your eyes on him, some day he will give the world something to talk about.” His music is extreme emotion and powerful. As a man, Beethoven remains something of a mystery, he lived a messy apartment, he fell in love with several women but never formed a lasting relationship, he wrote the famous symphony “the ninth symphony” when his ear was complete deaf, he is a greatest composer.

Answer 1

我改為如下: (我比較懶
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, 沒去算到底有幾個地方改了, 請包涵)
Beethoven composed in a great variety of genres,
including symphonies, concerti, piano sonatas, string quartets,
chamber music, masses, an opera, and various other genres.
As far as musical form is concerned, Beethoven used conventions
(that) he inherited from Haydn and Mozart,
but extended them -- his music was of the motive (或 motif) development type.
To many (people), Beethoven represents the highest level of musical genius,
as reputedly said of him by Mozart,“keep your eyes on him, some day he will give the world
something to talk about.”
His music is of extreme emotional intensity and powerful.
As a man, Beethoven's life remains somewhat of a mystery.
He lived at a messy apartment. He fell in love with several women,
but they never formed a lasting relationship (或 lasting relationships),
He wrote the famous“the Ninth Symphony”
when he was completely deaf. He is surely the greatest composer.
我改的當中一些句子是有根據的 (譬如第一句), 節錄自:
http://www.last.fm/music/Ludwig+van+Beethoven
http://midiworld.com/beethoven1.htm
www.physics.usyd.edu.au/~simonj/lvb/dates.html
另外我也加上: 是 Mozart (莫札特) 說的那句話, 為甚麼?
因為我是莫札特迷.
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