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Question

英文作文題目：Describe a day when everything went wrong about you

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Answer 1

points:
1.What happened?
eg.failed in the test,lated for school,classmates bullied you
2.How did you feel?
eg.upset,unlucky,strange,disappointed
3.Why did you have this feeling?
eg.because teachers punished me, friends didn't play with me
4.What date was that?
eg.today,yesterday
5.Who was there?
eg.Classmates,me,parents
6.What were you doing?
eg.having lessons in school,going back to home
7.At last,maybe you can say this was only a dream.That will be interesting!
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Answer 2

Today is a freaky day,all the things went wrong,including me!
Today,I went to school normally.When the computer class was finished,I played at the recess.Suddenly,I crashed one of my classmates who was called Jasper imprudently.I said sorry to him but he said,"Be careful,freak!" I was shocked.He was my best friend but why did he say this? It was really unimaginable! I went away after that.I went to the classroom.I saw many student were staring me.Why?I was shocked again."Why do you throw my schoolbag into the rubbish bin?"Jackie said.Me?I threw the schoolbag into the rubbish bin?Uh?I tried to explained,but Jackie and the students were still full of anger.I had nothing to say,I rushed into the toilet.I washed my face and I said to myself,"What the hell today?Why all the classmates aim at me?They are driving me crazy!" I went back to the classroom.I tried not to look at them.The bell rang.I was ready.Suddenly,a classmate threw my maths textbook under Catherine's chair.I went under the chair and picked it up.Meanwhile,the classmates said,"Tommy was watching Catherine's underwear!" "No,I don't!"I said."Yes,you do!"the classmates cried.Catherine stared at me fiercely.I went to my seat very disappointedly.Teacher came.Catherine told the business.Then,the teacher brought me to the principal office.After that,the principal reproved to me angrily and he called my parents to pick me up."That's great!"I thought.Finally,my parents brought me home.

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Answer 3

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我作左個故事形式GE....

Today,when I waited for the bus to go to school,I found that I haven't brought the English book so I needed to went back home to get it.But the worst thing is I have forgotten to bring the keys.OH MY GOD!!
I went back school at the risk of getting teacher's punishment.Unfortunately,I got late to school also.What's a bad day!I think I need to divine and see how bad luck am I.When I thought that all the things have been settle,something happened on me again.A reckless guy poured out his bottle of coke on me.I have no alternative to clean my uniform.
When my English teacher came,I felt that I will need to be faced with imminent disaster.Unerringly,I needed to stay after school.What's a true friend is?I just needed to stay after school for an hour,they have the audacity to leave me alone and sever our friendship.How unbelievable?
Just fine,I won't care it.But I only want to get back my luck.One day,Okay?