如果我要說「職位越高的人，更是需要組織能力」的英文

Question

我想問一個英文句子，如果我要說「職位越高的人，更是需要組織能力」那我寫這兩個句子通順嗎？因為我怎麼覺得有點怪怪的！我記得有一個句子是說 The more I make, the more I spend. 句子前後有對等的感覺，但是我下面寫的好像沒有ㄝ... >"< 所以想請問各位有更好的寫法可以提供嗎？謝謝你們~ ^^

the higher position people are in, the more organization they must need.
the higher position people are in, the more organized they should be.

Answer 1

版主句子形式是正確的，僅須修改"組織能力"一詞：
The higher position people are in, the more organizing capability they must have.
The higher the position people are in, the more coordinating ability they should have.
同一形式另有一個表達方式：
The higher the rank one achieves, the more organizing capability he must demonstrate.
rank: 位階 / achieve: 成就 / one: 一個人 / demonstrate: 表現出來
這是參考底下此一網站的用法：
The higher the rank one achieves, the more humble the individual should be. In western culture humility is often viewed as a weakness but the opposite is ... 爬到的位階越高，越須謙沖

Answer 2

the higher position people are in, needed more ability to organized people