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Question

If they are joining the 3-day tour, here is the ending, and the time is about 3pm. If they are joining the 5-day tours, at the night, we will go to Tai O and eat dinner in there. Because Tai O also known as the “Oriental Venice” is a unique and the only infect fishing village remains in Hong Kong. Tai O is a small fishing bay which is located a Tai O northwest, have Hong Kong Wearnes of call. It reserved a Chinese traditional Peng house, and salty fish and shrimp cream produced are very famous.

Answer 1

If they are going to join the three day tour the time will end at 3pm. But if they join the five day tour, we will go to Tai O and eat dinner there at night. We chose Tai O because it is known as the "Oriental Venice" and it is a unique and the only infect fishing village which remains in Hong Kong. Tai O is a small fishing bay which is located at Tai O northwest which have Hong Kong Wearnes of call. It has a Chinese traditional Peng house and the salty fish and shrimp cream produced there are very famous.

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2007-11-12 19:55:01 補充：
Tai O is a small fishing bay which is located at Tai O northwest which < >Hong Kong Wearnes of call. 改去Tai O is a small fishing bay which is located at Tai O northwest which < > Hong Kong Wearnes of call. 對唔住呀~~~ >.

Answer 2

If the visitors/participants are joining the 3-day tour, then their trip ends around 3 pm today. If they are joining the 5-day tour, then we will go to Tai O and have dinner there. Tai O is known as the “Oriental Venice”, is a unique place and the only remaining fishing village in Hong Kong. It is a small bay in the northwest corner of Lantau Island. Tai O preserves the Chinese traditional peng uk 棚屋(shack house/stilt house), and produces preserved fish and the infamous shrimp cream.


(have Hong Kong Wearnes of call 這句請問你想講甚麼?).

Answer 3

If they are joining the 3-day tour, here is the ending, and the time is about 3pm. If they are joining the 5-day tours, at the night, we will go to Tai O and eat dinner in there. Because Tai O also known as the “Oriental Venice” is a unique and the only infect fishing village remains in Hong Kong. Tai O is a small fishing bay which is located a Tai O northwest, have Hong Kong Wearnes of call. It reserved a Chinese traditional Peng house, and salty fish and shrimp cream produced are very famous.
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