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At the night, we will go to Mong Kok shopping and eat the dinner for themselves.


On the third day, we will go to Tian Tan Buddha Statue, which is the world’s largest, seated, outdoor, bronze Big Buddha statute. Located on the Ngong Ping Plateau, Lantau Island, this majestic statue is adjacent to Ngong Ping 360's Ngong Ping Village and the Po Lin Monastery. Then, if the tourists want to rides Ngong Ping 360', they can pay by their own expenses.

Answer 1

At night, We will go shopping and have dinner at Mong Kok.

On the third day of our tour, we will go to Tian Tan Buddha Statue, which is the world’s largest, seated, outdoor, bronze Big Buddha statute, located on the Ngong Ping Plateau, Lantau Island. This majestic statue is NEAR to Ngong Ping 360's Ngong Ping Village and the Po Lin Monastery. If the tourists prefer to ride Ngong Ping 360', they can pay by their own expenses

Answer 2

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At the night, we will go to Mong Kok shopping and eat the dinner for themselves.


On the third day, we will go to Tian Tan Buddha Statue, which is the world’s largest, seated, outdoor, bronze Big Buddha statute. Located on the Ngong Ping Plateau, Lantau Island, this majestic statue is adjacent to Ngong Ping 360's Ngong Ping Village and the Po Lin Monastery. Then, if the tourists want to rides Ngong Ping 360', they can pay by their own expenses.

Answer 3

We are going to Mong Kok for shopping and eating dinner there at night.

On the third day, we wil go to visit Tian Tan Buddha Statue, Tian Tan Buddha Statue is the largest statue in the world and seat in the adjacent to Ngong Ping 360's Ngong Ping Village and Po Lin Monastery, Lantau Island.

If tourists want to rides Ngong Ping 360', they are required to pay the cable fee.

Answer 4

At night, we will go to Mon Kok to do some shopping and eat the dinner .

On the third day, we will go to the Ten Thousand Buddha Statue, which is the world’s largest seated outdoor bronze Big Buddha statute. It located on the Ngong Ping Plateau of Lantau Island . Tthis majestic statue is adjacent to Ngong Ping 360's Ngong Ping Village and the Po Lin Monastery. Then, if the tourists want to rides Ngong Ping 360', they can pay by their own expenses.