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Let me bring some good news for the cancer. A word of “CURE” would comfort many patients. In the beginning, we should know what a cancer is. If we know it better, we then understand how to deal with it. There are good and bad bacteria that exist in our bodies. Bad bacteria are so called an essential element of cancer. It is actually not easy to get a cancer because it will take up to hundreds of thousands of abuses and mistreatment to the cells. Can you image for how many times that we have abused our bodies to extend and reach the danger before the cancer really occurs? If we know it we would certainly be scared by it but unfortunately we don’t. We often neglect what bodies really need instead of our desires. A cancer can’t be really cured once a person has it, can only be prevented when there are not too many of bad bacteria that exist in our bodies.

There are several ways to prevent from getting a cancer. I list out some for you to look at it.

Exercise – do you do regular exercise? How long does it last? Be persistent and persevering. Neither a short time nor an on and off exercises would do any changes to your body.

Daily diet – what you eat is really what you get? What is good for your body might not be in favor of your desires? To watch out your diet so that you won’t get too much refined food into your mouth.

Spiritual cultivation – Be aware of your behavior. To observe your thoughts, keep it as clear as possible. Bad thinking would lead you doing no good to your cells.

The above things are basically important to follow. It is our duty to treat, protect and take care of our bodies well regardless any other reasons. It should not be only for the sake of a cancer but oneself.

Can the cancer bacteria be diminished by following the above three essential steps? The answer is positive.
May God bless all the sick and weak.

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Answer 1

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Let me bring some good news for PREVENTING cancer. A word of “CURE” would comfort many patients. TO BEGIN WITH, we should know what CANCER is. THE BETTER we know it, THE MORE we understand how to deal with it. There are good AS WELL AS bad bacteria that exist in our bodies. Bad bacteria are so called an essential element of cancer. It is actually not easy to get a cancer because it TAKES LONG AND REPEATED ABUSE and mistreatment to the cells BEFORE YOU GET ONE. WE HAVE NO IDEA for how many times we have abused our bodies BEFORE WE ENTER THE REACH OF CANCER; WE would certainly be scared OTHERWISE. We often PAY LITTLE ATTENTION TO what THE BODY really needS BUT WHAT WE DESIRE. A cancer can’t be really cured once a person has GOT it. ONLY CAN IT BE PREVENTED BEFORE there are too many bad bacteria in our bodies.

There are several ways to prevent CANCER FROM HAPPENIG TO US, LISTED AS FOLLOWS FOR YOUR REFERENCE.

Exercise – Do you EXERCISE REGULARLY? How long does it last? Be STRICT AND persistent. Neither SHORT-TIMED nor IRREGULAR EXERCISE would BRING WHAT YOU EXPECT.

Daily diet – What you eat is really what you get. What is good for your body might not be WHAT YOU LIKE. CHECK your diet so that you won’t get too much refined food.

Spiritual cultivation – WATCH your behavior. KEEP YOUR MIND as clear as possible. Bad THOUGHTS MAKE YOU DO BAD THINGS to your cells.

Above are IMPORTANT BASICS to follow. It is our duty to RIGHTLY treat, protect, and take care of our bodies, for REASONS IN ADDITION TO the PREVENTION of cancer.

Can the OCCURRENCE OF CANCER be diminished by following the THREE ESSENTIAL STEPS ABOVE? The answer is positive.

May God bless all the sick and weak.

p.s.
1. Personal opinions for your reference.
2. Usually we don't consider "bacteria," but "viruses," causative agents of cancer.

Answer 2

** I have to say that your composition is almost perfect. There's almost nothing wrong with it. But I think it's better to be picky here, maybe you can take my advice into consideration.

Let me bring some good news for the cancer patients….. It is actually not easy to get a cancer because it will take (up to ) hundreds of thousands of abuses and mistreatment to the cells……. We often neglect what our bodies really need but yield to our desires….. It can only be prevented when there are not too many of bad bacteria that exist in our bodies.

(There are several ways to prevent from getting a cancer. I list out some for you to look at it.) → There are several ways you can do to prevent from getting a cancer, and they are listed below.

Exercise – …. Neither a short time nor an on and off exercises would do any changes to your body.




The above things are basically important to follow. It is our duty to treat, protect and take care of our bodies well regardless of any other reasons. It should not be only for the sake of preventing from getting a cancer but for the life itself.

I hope that my answer is helpful to you.

2007-11-08 00:07:58 補充：
It can only be prevented when there are not so many of bad bacteria in our bodies.
Exercise-...... do any change