[英文]寫英文信給舞台表演者

Question

英不不好,而近日有朋友想寫信給一個外國舞台表演者,但我只懂得寫中文,想請教大家的英文

內容:
得知你最近作舞台劇的演出,想親身到場支持,但礙於我們是外國人的關係,所以不能入場觀賞.令我們感到非常失望與遺憾.
而在我們留在這裡的最後一天,我們鼓起了最大的勇氣,在表演場地的門外等候你的出現,希望能親口跟你說一句'加油".和演出成功.
或許這是文化上的差異,我們不知道你們的事務所是不容許支持者接近藝人,因此當我的朋友嘗試接近你的時候,已給你的歌迷攔截了,令他感到非常沮喪.
對於今次的打擾,深深跟你致歉,或許你已忘了這件事,但對我和我的朋友已留下很深的記憶,
希望日後有機會能親身入場觀看你的演出,也希望你的事務所能改變公司的政策,讓我們這些即使居於國外的人,也能有機會循正確的途徑去參與.
最後,祝你在演藝事業上得到更大的成就

Answer 1

I know you do the drama, I also want to go there support. But hedge we are a foreigner's relationship, so can't saw you, make we so lose hope and regret.
We stay in here last day, we pluck up big bravery, 在表演場地的門外等候你的出現,希望能親口跟你說一句'加油".和演出成功.
Or it is culture's difference, we don't know your routine work 所是不容許支持者接近藝人,因此當我的朋友嘗試接近你的時候,已給你的歌迷攔截了,令他感到非常沮喪.
對於今次的打擾,深深跟你致歉,或許你已忘了這件事,但對我和我的朋友已留下很深的記憶,
希望日後有機會能親身入場觀看你的演出,也希望你的事務所能改變公司的政策,讓我們這些即使居於國外的人,也能有機會循正確的途徑去參與.

Last, wish you in the art house get a more bigger achievements.

Answer 2

Knew you recently made the stage play the performance, wanted to arrive by oneself the support, but obstructed to us was foreigner's relations, therefore could not enter the stadium to watch Makes us feel extremely disappointed and is regrettable But remains here last day in us, we have had the biggest courage, in performs the location outside the gate to wait for your appearance, hoped can personally say ' with you; Refuels " With performs successfully Perhaps this is in the cultural difference, we did not know your office is did not allow the supporter approaches the entertainer, therefore when friend of mine attempts approaches your time, for yours singer fan has intercepted, makes him feel extremely depressed Regarding this disturbance, is deep deeply makes an apology with you, perhaps you have forgotten this matter, but has left behind the very deep memory to me and friend of mine, hoped will have the opportunity to be able in the future to enter the stadium to watch your performance by oneself, also hoped your office will be able to change the company the policy, will let our these even if will reside in the overseas person, also will be able to have the opportunity to follow the correct way to participation Finally, wishes you to obtain a greater achievement at the acting career