(英文) 三個動作，要如何用分詞構句表達？

Question

我坐在我的位子上，雙手托著腮，靜靜地看著他們聊天。
這樣講對嗎？
I sat on my chair,resting my chin on my hand,watching them talking with each other .

Answer 1

版主您好:

在這樣的場景中, 如何使用分詞構句, 端看您所要的效果.
分詞構句一般是用於附屬的, 陪襯的動作; 而主要動詞則用以把焦點突出.
所以本句有三種方式:

我坐在我的位子上，雙手托著腮，靜靜地看著他們聊天。

Sitting on my seat and resting my chin on my hands, I quietly watched them chatting.
(強調"我靜靜地看著他們聊天")

Sitting on my seat, I rested my chin on my hands, quietly watching them chatting.
(強調"我雙手托著腮")

I sat on my seat, resting my chin on my hands and quietly watching them chatting.
(強調"我坐在我的位子上")

Answer 2

Resting my chin on my hand and, I sat on my chair watching them talking with each other.


I think this one works better.
FYI

Answer 3

很好呀~ 也許在watching前面加個 and, 會比較符合文法, 念起來也比較順