請問這樣的說法有沒有問題？We think that wil

Question

請問這樣的說法有沒有問題？或者要怎麼改。


謝謝!!


We think that will help to improve the relationship toward long-term and healthy between your company and us.

我希望能夠涵蓋下面的意義，謝謝：
我想那將有助於我門兩家的關係朝向長期與健全的發展。

Answer 1

"請問這樣的說法有沒有問題？We think that wil"：請問這樣的說法有沒有問題？或者要怎麼改。
我想那將有助於我門兩家的關係朝向長期與健全的發展。 -----
如照版主的原中文句子來忠實翻譯：
I think that will help (much) in the development of a long-term and healthy relationship between our two companies.
help in the development of: 在...的發展上有(許多)助益 / help=aid(可互換) / long-term and healthy: 長期與健全 / relationship between our two companies: 貴我雙方之間的關係 /
如果在適當的地方加強一些語氣的翻譯：
I believe that will help in the development of a long-term and solid relationship between our two companies.
believe: 相信，語氣高過"think" / solid: 紮實的
其他翻譯：
I am convinced that will contribute much to our common goal of a long-term and solid relationship.
be convinecd that: 深信 / contribute much to: 對...有許多貢獻 / our common goal of ...: 貴我雙方共同的...目標

Answer 2

We think that will help to improve the relationship toward long-term and healthy between your company and us.
應改為:
We think that will help to improve the long-term and healthy relationship between your company and ours.
句子改寫, 因原句Toward介係詞應接受詞
另外 ours = our company

Answer 3

小改:
We think that will help to improve the relationship between our companies in the long-term

Answer 4

We think about that it will help us to improve the relationship and healthy of long - term.