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請幫我看一下 我的speech 謝謝
我已經寫不下去了
有看過Othello 跟 Flightplan的人
可以幫忙我一下嗎

拜託拜託 謝謝

Good morning Mrs xxx and class mates, i am here today to discuss the nature of evil in Othello and I'll be forcursing on the character Iago and his power of influence.
I am also goin to examine this concept to my related text which is the film i choose "Flight Plan"

"I am not what I am"
so... why does Iago says this? Does this reveal Iago's personality? By pretendin to be trustworthy he continues to conceals his deceiful behaviours.
Carson form FlightPlan was pretty much the same as Iago, they show the same attutudes towards life.
but what is exactly the motivation of the power of evil? well let me tell you in othello Iago envy's Othello becasue he got everythings he wants
power, wife... In FlightPlan Carson was motivated by wealth .In Othello Iago disguise himself as a good person, but in another hand as
in the audience we also see his other side when he manipulate Cassio and
Rogierigo. By knowing what people might be worried about or knowing what they want, Iago manipulate people by this factors.
In Flightplan Carson Kidnapped Kyle's daughter, before kidnapping her daughter Carson even did a background check on them.
Carson knew Kyle has been taking midicines that might have illusions,so when Kyle told the captain her daughter is missing no one belived her.
because Carson already conspired with the airhostess so there well be no records of Kyle's daughter being on board. Which is a smart thing to do
because everyone would just think Kyle is just crazy. The director also plays with the audiens's brain. When everyone conjectured who is doing all this the director would always have something suprising for you.

But how does Iago gain his power from? Why was Cassio and Rogerigo manipulted by Iago?

Answer 1

Good morning Mrs xxx and classmates,

I am here today to discuss the nature of evil in Othello. I'll be focusing on the character Iago and his power of influence. I am also going to examine this concept with my related text, which is the film I have chosen, the "Flight Plan."

In Othello, Iago said "I am not what I am." Why did Iago say this? Does this reveal Iago's personality? By pretending to be trustworthy, he continues to conceal his deceitful behaviors.
Similarly, Carson, the air marshal from Flightplan, very much resembled Iago, and had shown the same attitudes towards life.
However, what is exactly the motivation of the power of evil? Well, in Othello, Iago envies Othello because he got everything he wanted such as power, wife, and etc. Iago disguised himself as a good person, but as the audience, we also see his other side when he manipulated Cassio and Rogierigo. By knowing what others might be worried about, or by knowing what others want, Iago was able to manipulate people.

In Flightplan, Carson the air marshal was motivated by money. Carson and his accomplice did a careful background check on the family of the movie's main heroine, and devised a complicated plan to smuggle money by plane.
Carson knew Kyle, the heroine, has been taking medicines that may cause illusions, and kidnapped Kyle's daughter. Due to the medication, when Kyle told the captain her daughter is missing, no one belived her.
At this point, Carson has already conspired with a hostess on the plan, and they have erased records of Kyle's daughter being on board. Which was a clever thing to do because everyone would just think Kyle is crazy. The director also played with the audiences' minds. When everyone was puzzled by the truth behind all that was happening in the movie, the director would always have a surprise for you.

But how did Iago gain his power? Why were Cassio and Rogerigo manipulated by Iago?

2007-08-22 09:40:44 補充：
我不能夠幫你寫功課, 不過幫你改了一些地方. 要小心拼錯字和文法. 注意不要這句用現在式, 下句用過去式-- 時間要一致.
寫這樣的文章時再多說一點關於Othello 或 Flightplan 的故事大綱會比較好因為也許聽眾不是每個人都讀過或看過? 要說得話一句一句完整寫好, 不要急著讓一個句子說超過兩件事. 這樣可以幫助你的無章更有條理, 聽眾更容易懂.
希望有幫到你. 希望你早日完成功課! 加油!

Answer 2

點數要多一點較會有人願意回答喔!