有請商英達人幫我以英文商業書信寫法中翻英

Question

麻煩以商業書信模式幫我中翻英下述內容:Nancy將寫一封郵件邀請Whiteside女士參加他們公司舉行的聖誕晚會，時間是12月24日晚上6：00至9：00，地點在Duke Hotel.並在郵件中請Whiteside女士盡快回郵件確定是否前來，郵箱地址為[e-mail],截止日期為12月15日

Answer 1

Nancy將寫一封郵件邀請Whiteside女士參加他們公司舉行的聖誕晚會，時間是12月24日晚上6：00至9：00，地點在Duke Hotel.並在郵件中請Whiteside女士盡快回郵件確定是否前來，郵箱地址為[e-mail],截止日期為12月15日

Dear Madam Whiteside:
How are you? Sincerely hope everything is fine.
We would like to invite you to participate our Christmas party at Dec. 24, from 6 pm to 9 pm in Duke Hotel.
We hope to have your positive answer before Dec. 15 by e-mail [e-mail], your early reply would highly appreciated.
Thank you and looking forward to seeing you at that date.

Sincerely yours,
ABC Company
Nancy


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Answer 2

dear Whiteside:
we sincerely invite you to join our Christmas party which is held by our company from PM 6: 00 to 9:00 at Duke Hotel on 24 Dec. please respond to us before 15 Dec whether you will come . my e-mail address is [e-mail]*****