Deear professors,
My name is jenny and will frowe SHU-TE . I am very curious and look foward to joing the Department of International Business Mangement of Taina University of Technology.
幫我檢查文法有沒有錯誤!
2007-07-02 08:36:22 · 4 個解答 · 發問者 ? 1 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
Ｄear professors
My name is Ivy and will frome SHU-TE . I am very curious and
looking forward to joining the Department of International Business Mangement of Taina University of Technology
上上的有寫錯!
各位教授好,
我的名子叫Ivy
我是就讀樹德家商畢業，我非常好奇也很期待進如
台南科技大學的國際企業經營系.
這樣的自我介紹OK嗎!?
2007-07-02 10:38:47 · update #1
Dear Professors,
My name is Ivy and I'M FROM SHU-TE (High School?). I'M very EXCITED and looking forward to JOIN the Department of International Business ManAgement IN TainaN University of Technology
字句跟文法要注意喔
大寫的是改過的
curious = 好奇
excited = 高興 會比較好聽
其他都ok, goodl uck! :]
2007-07-03 03:01:31 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
我是教授的話怎會讓一個"好奇寶寶"來我的系上?
考慮一下用字遣詞跟文章內容吧!
商職應用commerce high school，不是commercial high school吧，大大!
2007-07-02 23:03:54 · answer #2 · answered by SP 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ｄear professor
My name is Ivy. I graduated from SHU-TE home economic & commercial high school . I am very enthusiastic about attending the Department of International Business of Taina Technology University .*****
2007-07-02 11:19:53 · answer #3 · answered by 呆子 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
不太順!!你可以把你的草稿先po上來嗎?
這樣比較好幫你解決
2007-07-02 08:49:41 · answer #4 · answered by hanjo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋