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Question

Vacation
In this summer vacation, I will go to Kenting with my friends for three days. We will enjoy sunshine and swimming together. We have three ports in this trip. The first, we will have B.B.Q in the beach. I hope we can drink lot of wine and have fun with some bikini girl. Second, go to the night market and eat fresh seafood. That will be cool and make us agreeableness. The final port is the most I love. We will take a boat to see the gam. I think that will be fun and more excited. I hope in this trip will be safely and blessedly.
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Answer 1

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In this summer vacation, my friends and I will go to Kenting for three days. We will enjoy the sunshire and go swimming together there. In this such amazing place we ganna have so much fun with those cute bikini girls and drink a little bit, then go to the night market and have those great and fresh seafoods. After that we will go and do the best part of the trip, taking a boat to see the gam. It's ganna be so excited and have great time there. And also I hope this trip would be safely and blessdly.,

Answer 2

Vacation

DURING this summer vacation, I will go to Kenting with my friends for three days. We will enjoy sunshine and swim together. We have three PLANS in this trip. first we will have B.B.Q ON the beach. we can drink A lot of wine and have fun with some bikini girlS. Second, WE WILLgo to the night market and eat fresh seafood. That will be cool and make us agreeable. The final PLAN is the most I PREFER. We will take a boat to see the gam?. I think that will be fun and more excitING. I hope THAT this trip will be safe and blessed*****