請幫我改正以下文章

Question

Hey everyone, my name is Daniel... thats my english name...
i live in Australia, and i like to drink beer, get drunk and look at porn... haha
my hobby is....to play computers.. watch movies and....perve on hot chicks ..

i think thats about it....dont really have anything to talk about

這篇文章裡好像涵蓋一些錯誤請幫我糾正
perve是什麼意思?

Answer 1

Basically your English is quite good, so long people understand what you're trying to say. But why you put lots of "..." in sentences? haha

Nothing much to change:

look at porn --> viewing porn (my opinion, yours is alright)
play computers --> play computer games

perve = flirt (玩弄，調戲）

good luck!