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Washington is US'S political center, the White House, Congress, the supreme court as well as the majority government apparatus is located in here. The Congress building constructs in is called "the Capital Hill" in the entire city peak, it is Washington's symbol. This cream color construction has a dome host to hug with the east which mutually connects, west two wings buildings, the United States Congress Senate and the House of Representatives audiences all works in the Congress building. The White House is a white marble circular construction, after is Washington American all previous years president work and housing place. The ellipse US president's office is located in west White House in the side building, south outside the window is famous "the rose garden". South side White House building south lawn is "president the garden", American president often holds in here welcome the distinguished guest the ceremony. Between the Congress building and the White House has "the federation triangle" the architectural complex, including the federal state organization as well as the national art museum, the national archives, the pan-american union, the Smithson country museum and the federation stockpiles the building and so on. The Washington area biggest construction is located the wave to hold the Mark river river bank the American Department of Defense locus Pentagon.

華盛頓是美國的政治中心，白宮、國會、最高法院以及大多數政府機構均設在這裡。國會大廈建在被稱為“國會山”的全城最高點上，它是華盛頓的象徵。這座乳白色的建築有一個圓頂主摟和相互連接的東、西兩翼大樓，美國國會參議院和眾議院眾都在國會大樓裡工作。白宮是一座白色大理石圓形建築，是華盛頓之後美國歷屆總統辦公和居住的地方。橢圓形的美國總統辦公室設在白宮西廂房內，南窗外邊是著名的“玫瑰園”。白宮正樓南面的南草坪是”總統花園”，美國總統常在這裡舉行歡迎貴賓的儀式。國會大廈和白宮之間有“聯邦三角”建築群，其中包括聯邦政府機構以及國家美術館、國家檔案館、汎美聯盟、史密森國家博物館和聯邦儲備大廈等。華盛頓面積最大的建築是位於波托馬克河河畔的美國國防部所在地五角大樓。


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Answer 1

Washington is political center of the US. The White House, the Congress, the Supreme Court as well as the majority government agencies are located here. The Congress Building, also known as The Capital Hill, is located on the city’s highest peak and is a symbol of Washington. This cream-colored building has a round-shaped roof and two connecting east and west annexed wings. The US Congress Senate and most of the House of Representatives work in the Congress Building. The White House is a big, white, round marbled building. It is the office and residence of all the US presidents since Washington. The dome-shaped American President’s office is located in the west addendum. Outside the southern window is the famous “Rose Garden”. The lawn at the south of the White House main building is the “President’s Garden” where the US president always holds welcome receptions for distinguished guests. Between the Congress Building and the White House, there is the “Federal Triangle”, a complex architecture, which includes the federal states organizations and the National Art Museum, National Archives, Pan-American Union, Smithson Country Museum and Federal Reserve Building etc. The Pentagon, located at Potomac River banks, is the largest building in Washington.


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Answer 2

AFTER不能當主詞,語態不脫中式英文,ME之助譯屬上乘.

Answer 3

****國會大廈俗稱為“國會山莊”建於全城最高點上。***橢圓形的美國總統辦公室位於白宮西側，其南側窗外是著名的“玫瑰園”。****白宮南側草坪是”總統花園”，美國總統常在這裡舉行儀式迎接重要貴賓的地方。****國會大廈和白宮之間有俗稱“聯邦三角區域”的建築群，其中包括許多聯邦政府機構以及國家美術館、國家檔案局、汎美聯盟、史密森系列國家博物館和聯邦儲備大廈等。
PS--1.你的翻譯已很精準，我只是將需要潤飾部份列出2.依據美國憲法規定，華盛頓區域建築物不得超過國會山莊，另該建築物係坐北朝東，不知有無風水或其他意義，值得研究。3.Pentagon係幾何五角形***

2007-06-10 12:35:22 補充：
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