請幫我翻譯成中文 不懂這封信對方是否願意要給我offer

Question

Thank you for your application to pursue a PhD in the Department of Politics, which I received today. Your’s is an interesting proposed topic, but I would like to see some more detail about how you are going to develop your research and argument. For instance, what are the defining characteristics of an Atlanticist v. a European British foreign policy? Further, you need to significantly narrow your field of study to particular foreign policy events (probably only three). While not expecting you to identify them now, I would like to know a bit more about how you would go about choosing your cases.


謝謝各位高手 幫朋友代問 感激不盡~

Answer 1

Thank you for your application to pursue a PhD in the Department
of Politics, which I received today.
謝謝您申請政治學系博士學位，我今天剛收到。

Your’s is an interesting proposed topic, but I would like to see
some more detail about how you are going to develop your research
and argument.
您的申請是個有趣的提案，但我想看更多有關您想如何發展您的
研究及討論的細節。

For instance, what are the defining characteristics of an Atlanticist v. a
European British foreign policy?
例如，大西洋主義者相對於歐洲英國的對外政策的明確特徵為何？

Further, you need to significantly narrow your field of study to
particular foreign policy events (probably only three).
另外，您需要大大地縮小您的研究範圍至某些特別的外交政策事件
﹝可能只需三件﹞。

While not expecting you to identify them now, I would like to know a
bit more about how you would go about choosing your cases.
雖然不期望您立刻辨識，我想多知道一點您將如何選擇您的案例。


2007-06-07 18:06:59 補充：
對方未表示願不願意讓您就讀，只說明需要您提供更詳細的研究方向。

Answer 2

我今日已收到你申請政治系博士學位的文件

你所提出的專題是很生動有趣的，但是我希望能更深入瞭解你如何進行你的研究報告及論點

例如你如何定義大西洋國家與英國外交政策的不同? 其次， 你需要縮小你的研究範圍而針對特殊的外交事件 論述(約三個案例即可)

我不期待你現在就將這些案例做個別的論述，我想先要瞭解你如何去選擇案例.....〈延伸之義是將資料補齊後再行審核〉*****

Answer 3

基本上，這一封信並沒有明顯拒絕你的意思，但是也沒有說要錄取你。他們需要你提供更詳細的一些資訊之後，才會決定要不要錄取你。

中文翻譯如下：
我今天已經收到你的申請書，感謝你來信申請就讀政治學博士的學位。你信上所提出來的議題非常有趣，但是我希望你能夠提供詳細的資料，針對你所提出來的議題，你將如何做研究與驗證理論。例如：什麼是亞特蘭大人特色的定義跟歐洲大不列顛外國政策之間的比較。另外，你需要更進一步針對特別的外國政策事件（大概只需要 3 個就夠了）來延伸與窄化你的研究議題。目前並不期望你能請清楚的對它們做一些區別，但是我很希望知道更多關於你要如何針對你選的議題做研究。