問grammar同譯一條問題!唔該救命[20點!]

Question

如果我想問一個人[a company owner]2個問題,幫我睇下我有無錯grammar呀...ths!
另外仲想搵人幫我譯多一句...
第一個問題我想問佢你覺得自己算唔算成功,同點解
第二個問題我想問佢當佢係個teenager個時有無諗過自己會成為一個company owner...

需要翻譯ge係"係你成為一個company owner之前,有無遭受過1 d帶有歧視性ge批評?"

需要睇grammar的....
1]Do you think that you have already success?and why?
2]When you just a teenager,have you thought that you would become a company owner?


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Answer 1

Q1. Do you consider yourself successful, and why?
你o個句：Do you think that you have already success?and why?
你想用present perfect，可以，但係have 之後要再有動詞〔過去分詞〕，但success係名詞，要用動詞 succeeded。句意係：你是否覺得自己已經成功左？似乎同「你覺得自己算唔算成功」有ｄ出入

Q2. When you were a teenager, did you ever think that you would become an owner of a company? （由於呢個問題係被訪者年青時諗o既，呢段時間已經同現在無關，所以用past tense，不可能用 have you ever thought〔直至今天〕，除非冇指定時間〔年輕時〕；present perfect應用上唔會講幾時發生，simple past會）
你o個句：When you just a teenager,have you thought that you would become a company owner?
when you [were] just a teenager - 漏左動詞；comma後上例已經解左

Q3. 係你成為一個company owner之前,有無遭受過1 d帶有歧視性ge批評?
Before you became an owner of a company, did you receive any discriminative remarks?

Answer 2

1. Do you think you're a successful person? And why?

(Whether you pick my translation or not, it doesn't matter. But I can assure you "you have already success" is definitely wrong.)

2. When you were a teenager, have you ever thought that you would become a company owner?

3. Before you became a company owner, did you ever experience any discriminatory criticisms?

Answer 3

(1) Do you think that you are very successful ? Can you explain why ?

(2) Have you ever thought of becoming a company owner when you are still a teenager ?

(3) Before you become a company owner, have you ever received any discriminating criticism ?