error correction (文法)

Question

1. Almost students want to amke good grades.
2. Having studied Spanish for several years, Sarah's pronunciation was easy to understand.
3. Never i have been to New York.
4. Although I wanted to attend that college, but it was too far away from home.
5. I want that you come to dinner on Saturday.

可以幫我找出錯誤...改成對的嗎?

Answer 1

1. Most students want to make good grades.

大部分的學生想要有好的成績

如果堅持要使用almost的話，開頭則需要改成Almost every student，意思是幾乎每個學生

2. After having studied Spanish for several years, Sarah's pronunciation is easy to be understood.

在學習了西班牙文幾年以後，Sarah的發音很容易被理解

3. I have never been to New York.

我從未到過紐約

4. I wanted to attend that college, but it was too far away from my home.

Although I wanted to attend that college, it was too far away from my home.

although(雖然)跟but(但是)在英文裡是不能共存的，只能擇其一使用

5. I want you to come for dinner on Saturday.

我想要你星期六那天過來吃晚餐

希望我的回答能夠滿足您的需要

Answer 2

2. Sarah<>Sarah's pronunciation

=> Having studied Spanish for several years, Sarah made her pronunciation easy to understand.

Answer 3

1. Most students want to amke good grades.
Almost 為副詞不可形容主詞



2. Having studied Spanish for several years, Sarah's pronunciation is easy to understand.

前段係〈when she has〉studied Spanish for several years附屬子句簡化標準語法


3. Never have i been to New York.
此句係由Never引導之子句，在句首時要用倒裝句型，〈Never+助動詞+主詞+動詞〉



4. Although I wanted to attend that college, it was too far away from home.

Although與 but同為連接詞形成附屬子句，但不可同時使用

5. I want you to come for dinner on Saturday
本句為完整子句，若加了that 接附屬子句則語意不明，若要加上
that則可I want you that come for dinner on Saturday ，另come to用在患了疾病康復較多

Answer 4

1. Almost all students want to obtain good grades.

2. Having studied Spanish for several years, Sarah's pronunciation is easy to understand.

3. I have never been to New York.

4. Although I wanted to attend that college, it was too far away from home.
OR
I wanted to attend that college, but it was too far away from home.

5. I want you to come for dinner on Saturday.
(P.S. I think it's more polite to say "I would like you to come for dinner on Saturday.)