請各位英文高手幫我修正下面的句子?

Question

1.Therefore, please forgive my willfulness for the last time!
所以請原諒我,最後一次的任性吧!

2.To run into you is the most joyful time in my life.
遇到你是我一生中最快樂的時光

3.You are the most precious gift to me from heaven.
你是上天賜給我最珍貴的禮物

4.Perhaps I will forget you in the future,
或許將來還是會忘記你

5.but whatever happened to us will not go to the drain.
可是洗不掉我們的點點滴滴
6.You know what I think. You know my innermost feelings, don’t you?
你知道我的想法. 知道我的內心吧!
7. I’d like to take advantage of such a short time with memory.
想趁有記憶的這短暫的時間
8.But how can I communicate my innermost feelings?
可是該如何傳達我的內心呢?
9.There is so much to say. I’d like to express myself more.
想說的話很多. 很想多點表白自己
10.It was you who reminded me of the past.
是你讓我記起了以前

Answer 1

個人意見, 僅供參考.

It's been the most joyful timeinmylife since I ran into you.
遇到你是我一生中最快樂的時光

You are the most precious gift for me from heaven.
你是上天賜給我最珍貴的禮物(個人偏好)

But whatever happened to us will not go down the drain.
可是洗不掉我們的點點滴滴

There is so much to say to express myself further.
想說的話很多. 很想多點表白自己

It is you that remind me of the past.
是你讓我記起了以前



2007-04-20 13:14:01 補充：
...joyful time in my life...

Answer 2

HI, 您好
以下是我的翻譯,請參考看看

1.Therefore, please forgive my willfulness for the last time!
最後一次原諒我的任性吧!

2.To run into you is the most joyful time in my life.
遇到你是我一生中最快樂的時光

3.You are the most precious gift to me from heaven.
你是上天賜給我最珍貴的禮物

4.Perhaps I will forget you in the future,
或許將來還是會忘記你

5.but whatever happened to us will not go to the drain.
但無法抹去我們的點點滴滴

6.You know what I think. You know my innermost feelings, don’t you?
你知道的,知道我內心深處.不是嗎?

7. I’d like to take advantage of such a short time with memory.
想充分利用這短暫的美好時光記憶

8.But how can I communicate my innermost feelings?
可是該如何表達我(愛你)的心呢?

9.There is so much to say. I’d like to express myself more.
有很多話想說,但我想多表示

10.It was you who reminded me of the past.
是你讓我回想從前.