[英文]可以幫我改一下文法和用字嗎？

Question

不太會翻，而且自己文法又很差，想麻煩英文高手們幫我看一下我翻的英文這樣子對不對，還有要修改的一些用字。謝謝！！



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從不知道單一的玄武岩，竟也可以如此風情萬種，澎湖真是令人大開眼界!!!
I never know the single basalt can be so emotion in motion, Penghu really broadens my horizons.

澎湖群島除了花嶼是由玢岩構成外，其餘各島嶼均是由玄武岩熔岩流所組成的火山群島。
The Penghu archipelagoes except the hua isle made by porphyrites, the others isles are volcanoes archipelagoes that made by stream of basalt lava.

其經過長時間的侵蝕與海積，而形成現今壯麗的地質景觀。
It has passed long-time eroded and marine deposition, so formed the magnificent geology landscape now.

Answer 1

從不知道單一的玄武岩，竟也可以如此風情萬種，澎湖真是令人大開眼界!!!
澎湖群島除了花嶼是由玢岩構成外，其餘各島嶼均是由玄武岩熔岩流所組成的火山群島。
其經過長時間的侵蝕與海積，而形成現今壯麗的地質景觀。

先就版主的原文修改:
I never knew pure basalt can be of so rich expressions. Penghu really broadens my horizons.
Except the Hua Isle made of porphyrite, Penghu is a volcanic archipelago that is formed by basalt lava.
It has passed long time erosion and marine deposition to form the magnificent geologic landscapes now.
*"從不知道"的語意宜用過去式或現在完成式.
*single多半偏向數字的概念, 這裡的"單一"應該比較偏向"單純的"語意.
*archipelago本身就是"群島", 不須用複數, 除非有很多不同的群體.

另外提供個人的改寫版供您參考:
How eye-opening Penghu is with its bare basalt which I never expected to bear such diverse styles!!!
Except the Hua Isle made of porphyrite, volcanic basalt lava formed the rest of the Penghu archipelago, presenting now the spectacular geologic landscapes after long term marine erosion as well as deposition.
*bare basalt: 僅僅是玄武岩
*bear: 帶有
*diverse: 多樣的
*style: 風貌
*the rest of: 其餘的
*spectacular: 壯觀的
*long term: 長期的





2007-04-15 13:16:52 補充：
so rich expressions改為
such rich expressions

Answer 2

我沒有改很多
因為我覺得你自己原先就有一些翻的不錯
希望能幫上忙^^
從不知道單一的玄武岩，竟也可以如此風情萬種，澎湖真是令人大開眼界!!!
I never know that the simple basalt can be so breathtakingly beautiful and attractive. Penghu really broadens my horizons.

澎湖群島除了花嶼是由玢岩構成外，其餘各島嶼均是由玄武岩熔岩流所組成的火山群島。
The Penghu archipelagoes are mainly consists of volcanoes archipelagoes that made by stream of basalt lava, except the hua isle, which was made by porphyrites.
其經過長時間的侵蝕與海積，而形成現今壯麗的地質景觀。
It is through a long period of time of erosion and accumulation to form the magnificent geology landscape now.

Answer 3

第一句
Never know single basalt, unexpectedly can also thus exceedingly fascinating and charming, Peng-hu really makes the person open new vista greatly

第二句
Pescadores the flower island is constituted by the Fen rock, besides which, rest and each island is all by the volcano islands that basaltic molten lava constitute when flowing

第三句
It accumulates through the long-playing erosion and the sea, and the formation is a magnificent geology view at present

※ 希望有幫助到你唷^^