能幫我把中文翻譯成英文嗎??20點

Question

以下這一段~
我們要做英文口頭報告簡介
不要用DR.EYE

我們利用大學所學的，利用Microsoft Visual Studio .NET 2003結合資料庫的應用，針對在大學中所遇到不方便的事情，架構了一個系統，期待可以更有效率且更加方便的處理問題，或是能夠達成無紙化的目的

Answer 1

中文的說法看來就不太通順，英文如果照者翻，可以聽的懂得人更少
我試者大概用英文表達你想要表達的意思

We apply what we learnt in College to implement a system which integrates Microsoft Visual Studio .NET 2003 with database, in order to improve the existing inefficient system in the College.

We expect this new system can process information more effectively and efficiently, even to achieve the goal of paperless information processing.

2007-03-27 22:20:53 補充：
MIS 101

The existing inefficient system in the College 現有的沒效益系統，不一定一定要是 資訊系統(IS)

2007-03-28 01:38:58 補充：
The existing inefficient system in the College 現有的沒效益系統，也可能是人工作業的系統

Answer 2

We utilize the knowledge and skills that we learned from college, by the use of Microsoft Visual Studio .NET 2003 combined data, focus on the inconvenient that we encounter in the college, develop a system, expecting can help solving the problems more easily and quickly, that's the purpose of the 無紙化.

Answer 3

We make use of what university learns, making use of the Microsoft Visual Studio.NET 2003 combine the application of the database, aim at the inconvenient thing met in the university, configured a system, expect can more efficient and more convenient processing problem, or can reach to have no purpose that the paper turns