英文文法課,請幫我看看這篇作文有文法錯誤的地方嗎?

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請大家幫我看一看這篇文章有沒有文法錯誤的地方,文法課老師很
嚴格,希望能給我一點建議,讓這篇文章的文法能正確，謝謝您~

Describe a teacher at WenzaoWenzao(=文藻)
At Wenzao I think all of teachers are good .And I found a special teacher at Wenzao. She has short hair and with glasses. She looks not tall, but she is a cute-looking person. She is our conversation and listen teacher. She named Ms. LAN Fan Li.
Ms. LAN is a friendly and interesting teacher. She smiles to be like an angle very much. I like to go to her class. Because she usually tells us some interesting things about English, let us feel learning English is fun. Ms. LAN often encourages us tries to speak English in our life, and listen more English. In her class if we do not understand, she always repeat again and again, until we all understand. I like her very much, she is really kind and special . She is a good teacher.

Answer 1

Tteachers at WenzaoWenzao

At Wenzao I think all the teachers are good. I would like to introduce one of the teacher that I found very special. She has short hair and wear glasses. She is not very tall but very pretty. She teaches English conversation and listening at our class. Her name is Ms. LAN Fan Li.

Ms. LAN is a friendly and interesting teacher. She smiles like an angle. I like taking her class because she usually tells us some interesting stories about English and let us feel learning English is fun.

Ms. LAN often encourages us to speak English more in our daily life and listen more English. In her class if we do not understand anything, she always repeats what she says again and again until we all understand. That is why I think she is really kind and special, and I like her very much. She is really a good teacher.

2007-03-12 16:21:28 補充：
Sorry, the title should be "A teacher at Wenzao" as you specially write about one of the many teachers at wenzao.

Answer 2

沒有中文原稿啦，是自己想出來的，目前是文藻夜校生一年級，以後還請各位多多指教~

Answer 3

To introduce a teacher at Wenzao
I think all the teachers are good in my school . Especially a teacher who I found.  She has short hair,with glasses and not tall.  However, she is a cute-looking person. She teaches our conversation and listening. Her name is Ms. LAN Fan LiMs. LAN is a friendly and interesting teacher. She smiles as an angel very much. I like to go to her class because she usually tells us some interesting things about English to let us feel learning English is fun. Ms. LAN often encourages us tries to speak English in living, and listen to more English.  If we confuse, she always repeat until we all understand. I like her very much, she is really kind and special . She is a good teacher.
repeat 與again不可聯用.
She named...這樣寫沒禮貌
speak English in our life. æ²’那麼嚴重吧. living即可

 

2007-03-11 23:33:36 補充：
有逗點不要加and.

Answer 4

建議版主應把中文原稿也附上，對你的進步較有幫助!!^^
最喜歡看到像版主這種真的來這求進步的人~而不是叫人做作業的懶蟲!!XD