檢查Seeing Meng Haoran全文是否有錯

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這篇文是介紹[黃鶴樓送孟浩然之廣陵]
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就全文來看，介紹的文句是否有錯?應該怎樣改才好?
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[Seeing Meng Haoran off to Guangling at the Yellow Crane Tower] is a poem written by Li Bai ( also pronounced as Li Po ) in the Tang dynasty (618-907).
★ Li Bai
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Li_Bai

★ Tang dynasty
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tang_Dynasty

Here is the poem：
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yangzhou

Yangchow, also known as Guangling, is in Jiangsu of China. It is a part of the scenic attractions in Jiangnan.

Jiangnan ：http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jiangnan

Some beautiful spots at Jiangnan：
1. http://travelguide.sunnychina.com/travel_image/14630/53247/1

2. http://www.17u.com/destination/d_detail_226.html

Jiangsu： http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/JiangSu

The yellow Crane Tower is located at the west side of Yangchow, Wuhan cirty of Hubei.

The Yellow Crane Tower：
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/"Yellow_Crane_Tower"

Maps of the Yangtze River from Wuhan to Yangchow (near Nanjing)---the route Mr. Meng took to Yangchow：
1. http://www.china-tour.cn/images/China_Map_Guide/Yangtse_Rive.jpg

2. http://www.yelavich.com/photos/eh032803/03280399.htm

Wuhan：http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wuhan

Hubei：http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hubei

The pictures above were taken from the tourist sites of Jiangnan.

We can imagine the scenery of Yangchow during spring would be much more beautiful.

But Mr. Li had to bid farewell to his good old friend Mr. Meng in the beautiful spring. How sad it was!

In his poem, Mr. Li described the sailing boat was lonely because he was so concerned about his friend that only his boat could be seen by his eyes, regardless of how many people and how many boats were in the river at that time.

Mr. Li gazed at his departing friend and refused to leave before the boat had disappeared from his sight. We may guess Mr. Meng must have felt the same way.

The Yangtze River never stops flowing, as if it were implying Mr. Li's sorrow within.

Their friendship was so touching! Don't you feel the same?

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Answer 1

In Jiangsu of China, Yangchow, also known as Guangling, is a scenic attraction among others in Jiangnan.
The yellow Crane Tower sits to the west of Yangchow, Wuhan cirty of Hubei.
Maps depicting the Yangtze River from Wuhan to Yangchow (near Nanjing).
The scenery of Yangchow in spring time would be much more beautiful than we could have imagined, and Mr. Li could only bid farewell to his good old friend Mr. Meng in such a beautiful spring. How sad it was!
In Mr. Li's poem, he described the boat as sailing solitarily because he was so concerned about his friend as not to see what other boats and people there actually were.
Mr. Li gazed at his departing friend and refused to leave until the boat had disappeared from his sight. We guess Mr. Meng must have felt the same way.
The Yangtze River keeps flowing, as if it were Mr. Li's sorrow within.
Touching friendship, don't you think?

Answer 2

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