有英文文法強者可以幫看一下嗎？

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您好，這文章我已經很努力的改過了，但是似乎還是有一點文法上的問題，請大家幫幫我，點出這小段文章文法上是否還有錯誤，謝謝。

From Charlotte Bront’s Jane Eyre and Emily Bront’s Wuthering Heights, both two authors used monstrous images to describe the characters in their novels. Jane Eyre, who is the “heroine” in the plot, is in love and involved with a married man named Mr. Rochester but due to the fact that he is married, this was one of few reasons that prevented them from being together and getting married. Bertha Mason, Mr. Rochester’s wife, who is characterized as a monster by Charlotte Bront troubled Jane and Mr. Rochester’s relationship.

上篇有點錯誤，以下為更正
Bront’s -->Bronte’s

Answer 1

您如果是在寫 "analyzing essay" 的話所有的動詞都不能有過去式

[]裡面是有被更改過的


["Book name" by Charlotte Bront and "Book name" by Emily Bront], both two authors [use the] monstrous images to describe the characters in their novels. (必須要點出書名，裡面角色名字可以待會再提)

Jane Eyre, who is the ????? in the plot, [fells] in love and [is having an affair] with a married man, [] Mr. Rochester. ("involve"在這裡不適用，所以我假定你是在說他們兩個有外遇。我猜錯了告訴我)

[Mr. Rochester] is merried is one of the few reasons that [keep] them from being together and getting married.

[Mr. Rochester's wife, Bertha Mason, is characterized as a moster by Charlotte Bront and she always troubles Jane and Mr. Rochester's relationship.



有不懂的可以問我

Answer 2

候選四號回答得很棒~

Answer 3

In Charlotte Bronte's Jane Eyre and Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights, both authors described their characters with monstrous images. Jane Eyre, a "heroine" in the plot, was in love with Mr. Rochester, whose concurrent marriage, among others, prevented the two of them from being together. Bertha Mason, Mr. Rochester's wife characterized as a monster by Charlotte Bront, troubled Jane and Mr. Rochester with their relationship.
[註]
1. 不知道版主原來用involved with是否有其他特別含意, 否則in love with足以表達involved with.
2. 修改的原則盡量沿用原來的用字, 但力求經精簡達意.
3. among others: 表示所述為眾多原因之一.

Answer 4

From Charlotte Bronts Jane Eyre and Emily Bront s Wuthering Heights,
意思看來不完整 ...

both two authors used monstrous images to describe the characters in
their novels. Jane Eyre, who is the heroine in the plot of novel, was in love and involved with a married man named Mr. Rochester
However, due to the fact that he was married, this was one of few
reasons that prevented them from being together and getting married.
Bertha Mason, Mr. Rochester s wife, who is characterized as a monster
by Charlotte Bront,
最好新句子
troubled (with?) Jane and Mr. Rochester;s relationship.

Answer 5

1. both擺前面,不需from
2. both已經是說"兩者都"所以不需加two
3. 在used前加上主詞代名詞

Both Carlotte Bront’s Jane Eyre and Emily Bront’s Wuthering Heights were authors, who commonly used monstrous images to describe the characters in their(the) novels.

Jane Eyre, who was the ???????? in the plot and was falling in love with a married man named Mr. Rochester; (兩個子句若要聯合起來要加分號) but due to the fact that he is married, that (子句代名詞,不能用this)
is one of the few reasons which keep them from being together. (getting married可取消或者改用getting marriage)

Bertha Mason, Mr. Rochester’s whife, who is characterized as a monster by Charlotte Bront to trouble Jane and Mr. Rochester's relationship.

*基本上我沒有做很大的變動,只是這篇文章的文法怪怪的
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