對這句英文的”限定用法”有疑惑,請解惑

Question

原句- The next morning the king touched a chair, a flower and a table which all turned to gold. The king was very happy but when he tried to eat breakfast, his food turned to gold.

我覺得這句''The next morning the king touched a chair, a flower and a table which all turned to gold.''改成為

The next morning the king touched a chair, a flower and a table, which then all turned to gold.會比較好嗎?

因為"國王碰到這三樣東西,然後它們才變成金子"
原句直接用''限定用法'',我覺得怪怪的

還請指點 ^_^

Answer 1

我覺得這句''The next morning the king touched a chair, a flower and a table which all turned to gold.''改成為

The next morning the king touched a chair, a flower and a table, which then all turned to gold.會比較好嗎?
答：
沒錯。你這樣寫才更好。
原句的寫法也沒有錯誤，表達了相同的意思，只是當加了 then和逗號之後，變成補述用法，把時間的前後順序排出來，更清楚。