誰可以告訴我文法錯在那邊~~~

Question

1. Some economists fear that in China the air and water could in coming years bcome such polluted that further economic growth will be dampened.
為什麼such錯誤呢?要怎麼改呢?
2.Thanks to computer technology, nowadays, shoppers can find various items online ranging from second-hand clothing and submarines.
為什麼and錯誤?要改什麼?
3.Tiapei 101 Mall, the world's tallest building thus far,open to the public in mid-November of the year 2003.
為什麼open錯誤?要怎麼改呢?
4.Scientists have already invented a handled electronic device that translates cats' meow, purrs, and cries, into human languages.
meow要改成什麼?
5.The risk of lung cancer varies according to when one starting to smoke,how long and how much one smokes, and when one quits.
starting錯了~要改什麼什麼?
6.It has often suggested by psychologists that childhood maltreatment can create an antisocial adult.
suggested那邊錯了?怎麼改呢?
7.The confirmed patients were released from the hospital after being pronounced recovered,since the suspected patients are still being treated.
since那邊錯了?要改什麼?
8.In order to avoid blood clots in the leg, doctors have warned passengers who travel long distances not to stay seating for the entire flight.
seating錯了~要改成什麼呢?

抱歉~我看不懂你打的= ="~不用幫我改句子~我是不懂我用紅筆那邊的文法~

Answer 1

1. Some economists fear that in China the air and water could in coming years become so polluted that further economic growth will be dampened.
特定句型:
so + 形容詞 + that... (很...以至於...)
such + 名詞 + that... (很...的...以至於...)
e.g.:
The student is so smart that he understand right away.
Tom is such a smart student that he understand right away.
2.Thanks to computer technology, nowadays, shoppers can find various items online ranging from second-hand clothing to submarines.
from...to...: 從(二手衣物)到(潛艇)
3.Tiapei 101 Mall, the world's tallest building thus far, will be open to the public in mid-November of the year 2003.
be open to: 對...開放(營業)
4.Scientists have already invented a handled electronic device that translates cats' meows, purrs, and cries, into human languages.
與其後的 purrs, cries 相同(複數).
5.The risk of lung cancer varies according to when one starts to smoke,how long and how much one smokes, and when one quits.
與其後的 smokes, quits 相同(現在式).
6.It has often been suggested by psychologists that childhood maltreatment can create an antisocial adult.
意見是"被"提出的, 用被動語態.
7.The confirmed patients were released from the hospital after being pronounced recovered, while the suspected patients are still being treated.
"..., 而...", 也可以用 but, whereas.
8.In order to avoid blood clots in the leg, doctors have warned passengers who travel long distances not to stay seated for the entire flight.
seated: 坐著的(過去分詞當形容詞用)

Answer 2

因為字數過多,原題目不放上去 ><


1.

※such(f前面become少打一字) 要改成so
這是句型(固定用法)
片語: so.... that 太...以致於= too....to
He is so fat that he doesn't have a girlfriend.
He is too fat to have a girlfriend.
[比較] so that 如此一來
You have to go to bed early so taht you can catch the school bus.



2.
※我幫你改句子

Thanks to computer technology; nowadays, shoppers can find various
items such as second-hand clothes or books on Internet.
由於現在科技進步,我們可以在網路上買到許多東西,就如書籍 2手衣等等.

~請注意 ~我加上分號
且幫你改第2句(後半段)
clothes 是所有衣物(上衣 褲子 裙子等)的總稱 並非 clothing
submarine 這是潛水艇~我想錯誤是因為[屬性不一樣]


3.


※Taipei 拼錯了~ 我幫你改句子(有文法的錯誤)

Taipei 101, the tallest building in the world so far which was open in mid-November in 2003.
so far 到目前為止(可以省略)



4.

※ cats' 指許多貓的所有格
所以meow必須加上s 表許多貓叫聲




5.

※幫你修改句子
事實上不該用starting

The risk of lung cancer lies in when, how long, how much to smoke and when to quits.

lies in + N(名詞)
所以
when( to smoke ), how long( to smoke ), how much to smoke and when to quit
都是名詞片語




6.

※ Psychologists often suggested that childhood maltreatment can create an antisocial adult.

我改了一下句子 會比較通順



7.

※ since 前面不該加 "，"
修改: The confirmed patients were released from the hospital after being pronounced recovered since the suspected patients are still being treated.





8.

※seat是名詞 也許是把sit 誤用
正確為
In order to avoid blood clots in the leg, doctors have warned passengers who travel long distances not to stay sitting for the entire flight.

而sit加上ing變成動名詞形式時
需重複t變成sitting
過去式為sat 過去分詞為sat


如果seat要當動詞用
用法如下a&b兩點
和上面句意不符合


a.使就座
He seated himself in a chair.
他在椅子上坐下。

b.有...座位,容納...人
The auditorium seats 3,000 people.
這個禮堂可坐三千人。