請問這幾句 的文法有錯誤嗎

Question

第一個
這是我三篇日記。
Excuse me.

If you detect that your girlfrind is awful when she no makes up.


what would you do?
Are you disappoint or you don't care?
If you very care about that, will you separate with her?

I'm so curious.

第二個

Today , The African-American lost his way ; thus , he asked me a question.
"Are you tell me where's the Academia Sinica?" he said.

He left suddently when I thought how do I told him.

I am angry about his behavior so I say "shit".

I didn't knew that I wondered if he has heard my talk.

If you met that.
how will you do?


you don't damn me "shameless",please.
I just hope that anyone correct my diary, that's all there is to it.

第三個

I met a female stranger at 7 p.m.
She is approximately fourteen years old.
I didn't kewn she was knock-out or awful because there was dim.
However, it's not until I was looking her a few times that she damned me
"Are you looking a shit yo?"
I was astonished because his talk; thus, I told her "I was looking a female
shit." ............ in my heart.

No woder anyone damn the junior high school students is wicked peoples.

look at them, it's supprising their attitudes.
If you were me. How will you say to him?

Otherwise, if my sentence's grammar is wrong , can you correct it for me?

thanks.

假如您要幫我找錯，請不要整段重寫好嗎，這樣我會有全錯誤的感覺，改錯的字就好了，
謝謝您

Answer 1

我盡量少改
請把 字詞 換成 (字詞) 然後加 (內的字)
****
Excuse me.

If you detect that your girlfrind (girlfriend) is awful when she (has) no makes (make) up (on).
What would (will) you do?
Are you disappoint (disappointed) or you don't care?
If you very (really) care about that, will you separate with her?
I'm so curious.
第二個
Today , The (an) African-American lost his way ; thus , he asked me a question, "Are (can) you tell me where's the Academia Sinica?" he said.
He left suddently when I thought (was thinking) how do I told (to tell) him.
I am (was) angry about his behavior so I say "*****".
I didn't knew (know) (that I wondered 跟前面意思類同 不需要) if he has heard my talk.
If you met (meet 或 encounter) that. how (What) will you do?
you don't damn me "shameless",please.
I just hope that anyone correct my diary, that's all there is to it.
第三個
I met a female stranger at 7 p.m.
She is approximately fourteen years old.
I didn't kewn (know) she was (a) knock-out or awful because there (it) was dim.
However, it's not until I was looking her a few times that she damned (cursed at) me, "Are you looking a ***** yo?"
I was astonished because (of) his (her) talk; thus, I told her "I was looking (for) a female *****." ............ in my heart.
No woder (wonder) anyone damn the junior high school students is (are) wicked peoples.
look at them, it's supprising their attitudes. (這句 不懂)
If you were me. How will (would) you say to him (her)?

Otherwise, if my sentence's grammar is wrong , can you correct it for me?
thanks.
****
希望幫到你

Answer 2

嗯，看了以後我不知該怎麼改哩~
像第一篇，你的make up是啥意思?化粧嗎?正確用法是have a make up!沒有人直接說make up是化粧的，因為make up有很多意思，一般而言會當成補課，補班的意思~
disappoint是動詞，所以請用助動詞"Will you disappoint it?

還有第二篇我不認為African-American會說Are you tell me where's the Academia Sinica?最後二個字的意思是啥?
另外助動詞後請記的用原形動詞，I didn't know~~

第三篇我看不懂你寫的意思哩~
只注意到女生要用she，不是he~