[急]修改英文翻譯

Question

Abstract
The auction system is presented as if Yahoo! Auction and eBay auction [8, 9, 10, 11] and so on. They only offer the flat vision impressions to the user, but the purpose of this paper is to give user different vision such as fresh operate interface. Then we adopt the stereoscopic object by the function of customer manufacture. Beside it enable each seller develop an new idea to design their own store, and let buyers do shop as really in the store. Customer manufacture let each seller put the stereoscopic object designed by us to the place which sellers want to place, and design characteristic store most. In order to let customer enjoy the feeling of fictitious in the virtual environment, the sellers not only move and change of the stereoscopic object but also make proper adjustment to the atmosphere in the shop, such as music, light and speech and so on. Our auction mechanism is different from traditional auction mechanism. The result of the online game integrate auction website will bring a new businesses opportunity. It really achieve that the users do not need to step outside and let the users feel coming to the store personally.

摘要

目前的拍賣系統，像是奇摩拍賣、eBay拍賣等[8, 9, 10, 11]，只提供給使用者平面化的視覺觀感且缺乏客製化的功能，而本篇研究的主旨就是要給使用者不一樣的視覺感覺，嶄新的操作介面，採用立體形式呈現，透過客製化的功能，讓每位賣家都能發揮創意，設計自己的商店，創造出自己獨有的商場，就像真的置身於商店中購物；客製化就是讓每位賣家透過我們所設計出的立體物件，經過拖曳，將物件擺放到想放置的地方，設計出最具特色的商場。除了立體物件的搬動與更換之外，也可對店內的氣氛做調整，例如音樂、燈光與語音等，讓光顧者在虛擬環境中享受視覺的立體感。這樣的商品拍賣機制與傳統的拍賣機制有非常大的不同，線上遊戲整合拍賣網站的結果將帶動一股新的商機，真正實現不需踏出家門，也能有親臨店家的感覺。

關鍵字：拍賣系統、客製化、虛擬商店、立體物件。

修改注意事項:
幫我留意中英文對照和英文文法、單字有無錯誤即可。

Answer 1

幫版大做一些修飾，因該是沒有錯誤的

目前的拍賣系統，像是奇摩拍賣、eBay拍賣等[8, 9, 10, 11]，只提供給使用者平面化的視覺觀感且缺乏客製化的功能，而本篇研究的主旨就是要給使用者不一樣的視覺感覺，嶄新的操作介面，採用立體形式呈現，透過客製化的功能，讓每位賣家都能發揮創意，設計自己的商店，創造出自己獨有的商場，就像真的置身於商店中購物；客製化就是讓每位賣家透過我們所設計出的立體物件，經過拖曳，將物件擺放到想放置的地方，設計出最具特色的商場。除了立體物件的搬動與更換之外，也可對店內的氣氛做調整，例如音樂、燈光與語音等，讓光顧者在虛擬環境中享受視覺的立體感。這樣的商品拍賣機制與傳統的拍賣機制有非常大的不同，線上遊戲整合拍賣網站的結果將帶動一股新的商機，真正實現不需踏出家門，也能有親臨店家的感覺。

The present auction system, the picture is wonderfully touches the
auction, the eBay auction and so on [ 8, 9, 10, 11 ], only provides
for the user the plane vision impression also lacks the guest makes
the function, but this research primary intention is needs to give the
user the same vision to feel, the brand-new operation lies between
the surface, uses the body form to present, passes the traveler
makes the function, enables each seller to display the creativity,
designs own store, creates market which own is in sole possession of,
likelihood placing oneself in store shopping; The guest makes is lets
the three-dimensional thing which each seller penetrates us to design,
the process towing, places the thing to the place which wants to lay
aside, designs most has the characteristic the market.
The sellers not only move and change of the stereoscopic object but also make proper adjustment to the atmosphere in the shop, such as music, light and speech and so on. Our auction mechanism is different from traditional auction mechanism. The result of the online game integrate auction website will bring a new businesses opportunity. It really achieve that the users do not need to step outside and let the users feel coming to the store personally.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

Abstract
The auction system,presented as like Yahoo auction, eBay auction [8, 9, 10, 11] and so on, only offers the planar visual impressions to users but not customized function, and the purpose of this research is to give users different feeling in vision, such as fresh operate interface. We adopt the stereoscopic object by the customized function. Furthermore, it enables each seller to develop his own-designed store, allowing buyers to do shopping as they are in the real store. In order to create the the unique environment, customized manufacture enables each seller to put the stereoscopic object to the place where he/ she wants to place. To let customer enjoy the feeling of fictition in the virtual environment, the sellers not only moves and changes the stereoscopic object but also makes proper adjustments ot the shop, such as music, lights, sounds and so on. Our auction mechanism is different from traditional ones. The result of the online game integrated auction website brings new businesses opportunities,permitting users to stay at home but have the same feeling as they are shopping personally.