如題,謝謝
Q:Would you like to be as wealthy as the people your've heard about in this lesson?
A:I think I would like to be Martha Stewart, but I don't want to imprison.
She is smart,rich and independent.
Q:Can money buy happiness?Why or Why not?
A:Yes,sometimes I would like to buy something to make me happy....and I think money is very important and necessarily but it isn't everything..
Q:What would you do if you won the lottery?
A:I will put the money in the bank...and buy a diamond ring to please
myself....
2006-12-19 10:57:33 · 2 個解答 · 發問者 琪 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
你寫得很好, 在我看來只有錯少少的一點點 ^^
第一題==>I don't want to go to jail. (imprison不是"被關"而是"關別人", 改成被動的be imprisoned也可以, 但還不如說go to jail來得白話些。)
第二題==>
buy something改成buy things比較好, 因為something主要是當作代名詞使用的。
money is very import and necessary (不是necessarily)
2006-12-19 11:21:14 · answer #1 · answered by Mee 奇摩 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A:I think I would like to be Martha Stewart, but I don't want to
be imprisoned. She is smart,rich and independent.
A:Yes,sometimes I would like to buy something to make myself
happy....and I think money is very important and indispensable but it
isn't everything..
A:I will put the money in the bank...and buy a diamond ring to please
myself....
2006-12-19 11:19:15 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋