英文強的幫我改一下這篇作文

Question

I have been in a difficult situation is dispute with my friend.First ,
I feel our personaluty are not harmonious . Second, I feel she
is manage too over.But she is also the most clouse friend for me. My heart is very pain. I don't know should I continue to be a friend with her. But if we continue to be friend , I will be loss my happy. Because when we walk together,I have a big pressure.

So I keep a distant ,and slowly go away from her. My parents also hope me con live in happy life.I can't think a lot to manage my personality relative now.

Answer 1

I had a fight with one of my best friend which lead me to think though our friendship . First , I feel our personality are not harmonious . Second, she is a very controlling person, but she is still one of my closest friend. I am hurt and I feel my heart with this pain. I don't know should I continue to be friend with her. If we continue to be friend , I will not be happy. I feel great pressure when we walk together. So, I keep a distance with her and try to walk slower and stay away from her. My parents also want me to live a happy life. I think I should spend too much time on my personal relationship now.

Answer 2

我幫你改了:
I have heard that conficts between friends are unpleasant, I have always assume that it will never be my problem, but I was wrong. I am in a difficult situation; I am now in dispute with my friend, This situation is like a quagmire pulling me down to the depths. It seems that we have grown apart. First, I feel our relationship are falling into pieces. Second, I feel she is too hard to handle, maybe caused by her obstinate personality. But she is also the closest friend I have, I do not wish to lose her. My heart is in pain; I don't know if I should I continue to be friends with her. If we continue to be friends, I will lose my happiness. Because when we walk together, there seems to be a invisible wall between us. She might not realize it, but her presence is giving me a lot of pressure.
In order to protect myself from this pressure, I now kept my distance, and move slowly away from her. My parents also hope that I can live in harmony with my friend. I can't think of any thing that can get me out of this and reunite our friendship. It will take incredible prowess to get me out of this jam.

sorry~沒有中文版而你的英文我也不太懂，所以只好這樣改了，希望你滿意。