找錯處,特別最尾個句。
Reading books may let us increase the comprehension ability,increase the knowledge,enhance the accomplishment mastery ,increase many talking topics with friends, study the knowledge ,enhance the writing technique ,appreciate others writing technique ,dispatch the time and may know more about vocabulary .
The reading advantage may also extend our visual field ,enabled us to search the myriad world fills colourful and unpredictable .
2006-12-06 05:16:02 · 3 個解答 · 發問者 k 2 in 社會與文化 ➔ 語言
Reading can strengthen our comprehension(其實comprehension已經是理解力), widen our knowledges, enhance our accomplishments and make us have wider and deeper dialogues with our friends. Through studying we can gain knowledges, appreciating the others’writing the writing skills. Wide reading will also increase our vocabulary． Besides, there are a lot of advantages of reading, one is that it can widen our horizon. Everyone can travel round this world so vast, so colorful and so marvelous by the ship of reading. Would you like to embark this ship with us.(最後一句自己加，使文章更生動）
希望你喜歡這些改動！
2006-12-06 12:49:17 補充：
從你的文章裏，也能看到你的努力，因為你也嘗試用不同的生字在文章中；大膽的嘗試，加上細心的求問，你的英文必定進步很快。再者，若你正如文章所說，多看一些英文文章、書籍，小說，你寫作的枝考也會進步神速。其實，你也可以在嘗試運用生字之前，看一看字典是怎樣用它，這樣，你會更快掌握。
2006-12-06 07:43:26 · answer #1 · answered by HaHa 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the comprehension ability = our comprehension ability
increase the knowledge = increase our knowledge
accomplishment mastery = omit this, my understanding of these words are the comprehension that you mentioned. you cannot translate everything from chinese word for word or people won't understand.
increase talking topics = expand the topics of conversation with friends
enhance the writing technique = enhance our writing technique
others writing technique = others writing techniqueS
dispatch time = pass the time
may know more about vocabulary = increase our vocabulary
the reading advantage = the advantage of reading
extend = widen
visual field = horizon
enabled = enable
the myriad world fills colourful and unpredictable = this colorful and unpredictable varied world
Reading books may let us increase our comprehension ability, increase our knowledge, expand the topics of conversation with friends, study the knowledge, enhance our writing technique(s), appreciate others writing techniques, pass the time and increase our vocabulary. The advantage of reading may also widen our horizon, enable us to search this colorful and unpredictable varied world.
你總共就得兩句﹐ 我覺得你可以將你第一句變成幾句好D﹐ 一句苛成好似有D 問題﹐ 讀落去唔系幾順。 好似你可以將 study the knowledge 開始變成第二段﹐ 好似用 we can study the knowledge 甘。 再有 pass time 開始令一句, help us pass the time。 最後個句你可以用 and 黎合成一句﹐ 唔使豆號。
2006-12-06 08:34:19 · answer #2 · answered by dlastme 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
world-->words
2006-12-06 05:27:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋